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The Gambler

I sat at table set for poker, the devil's dealer dealing joker. When delt my hand he dealt my fate, two pair I had both of eight. I wore my poker face so well, to make the pot swell and swell. When I had had all my share, I pushed all in for all to stare. In giving cards one final glance, I said, "Four eights now take your chance." The dealer gave an evil grin, then he said, "Four nines I win." And as I left with pockets filled with lint, I thought how can I pay the rent. Rather going home to face the wife, I just as soon as take my life. And there it was a wad of cash, just lying there. I said to self a gift to prayer. I picked it up and started home to pay my bills, on second thought what's one more deal. 9/23/18

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Date: 12/20/2018 6:32:00 PM
Loved this one! You've captured the gambler's addiction so poetically. And congrats on your win in Brian's contest. Season's best, Gershon
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Wren Rushing
Date: 12/20/2018 6:50:00 PM
Thank you Gershon and have a Merry Christmas.
Date: 12/20/2018 8:11:00 AM
How have I not commented on this poem before! It is very clever and I enjoyed it! "on second thought what's one more deal." Congratulations on your honors in Brian Strand's contest :)
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Wren Rushing
Date: 12/20/2018 11:30:00 AM
Thank you PS.

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