The Future's Yours

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happy birthday, my darling may you never grow up always remaining childlike in all the many ways that count may the wings of imagination carry you through the years and sail you through whimsical musings of playful exuberance may your sense of adventure lead you to forge your own unique path never hesitating to conjure awe at wonders universal large and small may you never lose your curiosity for all the world has to offer always guard your sense of humor it will get you through life’s challenges may you always treasure purity of heart where innocence forever has its place never stop nurturing your carefree sparkle and above all for you I wish love always AP: 2nd place 2020 Submitted on July 26, 2020 for contest STRAND COMPLETELY NEW (14) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/29/2020 12:47:00 AM

Those are some deeply honest and beautiful wishes full of innocence and love. Childhood is the gem in our memories. Congratulations on your win Line! :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/29/2020 6:47:00 AM

Thanks, Aditi. Much appreciated ~

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/27/2020 1:11:00 PM

This is inspiring...well done

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/27/2020 3:48:00 PM

Thanks, Arturo. Much appreciated~

Jenish Somadas

Date: 7/26/2020 10:05:00 PM

may you never grow up.. always remaining childlike..A thought of every loving parent whose child had grown.. Sweet lines conveying great messages.. Good luck..

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/27/2020 2:06:00 AM

Thank you, Jenish, for your much appreciated visit and comment.