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Premiere Contest WinnerThe Fulfillment, 1905, Gustav Klimt

h o l d  me
when the world w   e
                                 e   p   s 
and the wounds w a n e 
like frayed 
        threads of fear,
as I, a gilded frame,
long to mirror your lyrical light,
to be the ethereal echo
tethered to the 
warm orbit of you…
while mind unlocks
its secret Milky Way,
as love whispers
in soft cadence,
finding words to
             erase learned woes.

O beloved sunrise,
color me in 
                 sighs of silence,
like rhymes of roses,
a vanilla villanelle
etched from 
the exquisite essence
of a cosmic consequence,
leading me into 
                the arms of light,
as the lamented night
bent its empathetic knee 
to the seraphic sight 
of soul-satisfaction,
whilst pained pulse kept
solar seconds ~ 
counting constellations
within my chest,
curating confessions
from crestfallen stars,
sewing scars with
sparks of saffron and salmon…

and I ponder ~
is this a diamond dream 
spun within 
an awakened dawn
of glistening gold,
to home me in the
healed harmony
of your tender heart,
with acrylic
incantations of citrus flame,
as I am luminous layers of
a complex canvas,
aching for compassion,
awake in 
e c l i p s e d 
                   stillness,
like the supernova sun
devouring
the silk of its own sky…

yet even in this
aesthetic
fulfillment of 
faultless infatuation,
I memorized your meteor showers,
flourishing in the thought
of rising beyond
the demise of despair,
to become the only pattern
across the fabric of faith
in your duvet of damask devotion,
no longer tripping
          on temptations,
but 
t r a c i n g 
the cashmere curves of
reality ~ 
picturesque portrait
of a 
       passionate promise, paradise painted
                                 forevermore…
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Hind Avatar
March 8, 2026 at 11:08 PM
"like the supernova sun devouring the silk of its own sky…" woah :) <3
Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2026 at 11:05 AM
Way to go with another trophy win, sweet Ink. Well deserved.
Kendrick Avatar
March 6, 2026 at 9:21 AM
Back with congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Sara K
Buehler Avatar
March 5, 2026 at 2:24 PM
Your poem describes the painting in exquisitely beautiful detail, Ink. Reading it was such a delight! Congratulations on your first place win. Very best wishes. :)
Cunningham Avatar
March 5, 2026 at 1:34 PM
You have a real talent for getting into the heart and soul of the painting. Congratulations on your trophy win. Tom
Jones Avatar
March 5, 2026 at 7:09 AM
Back to say a much deserved win for this gem! Congratulations Inky on first place!
Empress Avatar
March 5, 2026 at 9:16 AM
Thank you so very much sweet soul karen. Grateful truly. Sending you light alwayd
George Avatar
March 5, 2026 at 4:37 AM
What sweet flow of emotions cascading down into a torrent and l see you being carried away by the gentle waves into a heavenly world shut out to all old scars. no longer tripping on temptations or being shadowed by doubts. Love this paradise you have painted. Stay there for ever. Empress, you are an empress destined to stay amid a rich galore of trophies.... unmistakable recognition of your merit as a bard. Hearty Congratulations.
Empress Avatar
March 5, 2026 at 5:38 AM
Dear sweet valsa, What a sweet surprise! I did not expect this trophy win at all. Im also touched by your ever so beautiful compliments and well wishes! You always leave my soul warm with gratitude. Sending you light today and always …
G  Avatar
March 5, 2026 at 1:19 AM
Congratulations Ink! How could this not be the glittering trophy winner! A resplendent poem, worthy of all the accolades :) woohoo! :)
Empress Avatar
March 5, 2026 at 5:40 AM
Wow! I didnt realize and im truly honored! Thank you so very sincerely for being here to support me, im grateful for friends like you! Sending you light always
Beaufort Avatar
March 4, 2026 at 3:30 PM
IE, the vulnerability you expose touches my soul. It is nice to be taken care of at times. Hopefully, we all have a person or persons who can do that for us. Your poetry is really very sweet. Sending many smiles!!!
Empress Avatar
March 5, 2026 at 5:44 AM
Dear Duke its always so good to hear from you, I hope you are doing well, i appreciate your warm comment. Sending you light always
Rodgers Avatar
March 3, 2026 at 5:22 AM
Dear Empress, Your take on Klimt’s The Fulfillment is absolutely spellbinding. You’ve managed to look past the "glistening gold" of the canvas to find the deeply human persona underneath. I was moved by the shift in the final stanza, where the "aesthetic fulfillment" meets the "cashmere curves of reality." It’s a great observation on how love evolves from a "diamond dream" into a "passionate promise" that can actually house a person. Such an evocative, layered read that sparkles the mind. With much admiration, A FAV and worth reading several times, Blessings, Empress, Daniel
Empress Avatar
March 5, 2026 at 5:51 AM
Dear Daniel, Youv analyzed and left a comment that is so very soulful and sincere which shows that you dont just read but also feel poems, so empathetic you are! Absolute pleasure reading your comment today’ sending you light today and always
Buhagiar Avatar
March 3, 2026 at 1:01 AM
Great alliteration and wonderful imagery. Stupendous poem. Glad to see you back.
Empress Avatar
March 5, 2026 at 5:53 AM
Thank you so much dear Victor, grateful for your support. Sending you light always
Jones Avatar
March 2, 2026 at 4:47 PM
Wow! The imagery and alliteration is magical. I love it all especially “ O beloved sunrise, color me in sighs of silence, like rhymes of roses, a vanilla villanelle etched from the exquisite essence of a cosmic consequence, leading me into the arms of light,” I’m so glad you’re back Inky for reading you helps me grow! I can re read and see more than at my first reading because you are brilliant! Fav Hugs
Empress Avatar
March 5, 2026 at 5:59 AM
Awwn thats such a sweet and thoughtful thing to say, it really made my day seeing you say that. I am truly touched beautiful soulx even if i am not back, you have me on insta… to read but i dont post long poems there. Haha. Sending you warm light and love today and always.
Kauffman Avatar
March 2, 2026 at 2:21 PM
Dearest Inky, I love it when you let your mind ponder and observe in an ekphrasis in "cashmere curves!" Klimt in his "gold" period is a master at catching the soul of gold and you masterfully capture that shining spirit in your poem. Always love your images that reflect emotions and the deeper person. Blessings dear friend. Samzy!
Empress Avatar
March 5, 2026 at 6:15 AM
Awwn thank you samszy sweet soul you make my day with your kind soulful comments truly. So very grateful for your presence. Sending you light always
Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2026 at 2:15 PM
It's just amazing how you can take a painting and be so inspired by it to pen such beautiful lines of poetry. As always, you rocked it, Ink!
Empress Avatar
March 5, 2026 at 6:22 AM
It is, i did some reading on the background of this artwork. I love this artist! Im grateful always for your support sweet andrea! Sending you light always
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 2, 2026 at 11:46 AM
What a beautifully fabricated Ekphrasis you have woven together here Ink, the alliteration is as good, if not better than anything I have read before, never gratuitous, just interspersed meaningfully producing a satisfying fulfilment! Brilliant! Cheers David
Empress Avatar
March 5, 2026 at 6:24 AM
Dear David, Thank you so much for your visit and comment. Im truly grateful that you think so about my use of alliterations and interpretation of the artwork. Im grateful also for your support. Sending you light always
Kendrick Avatar
March 2, 2026 at 11:38 AM
Very descriptive and expressive lines penned. Unique layout. Sara K
Empress Avatar
March 5, 2026 at 6:25 AM
Thank you dear sara, appreciate your kind support. Sending you light
Bordner Avatar
March 2, 2026 at 11:10 AM
To hug You like a feeling found lost is to hug myself in comfort of love cost ample yearn, our embrace textured as time on warm lips, our comprehension of life compressed gently as young petals holding the secrets of the sunlight...J.A.B. "Like the supernova sun devouring the silk of it's own sky...", that's vivid consumption! This poem is a FAV!! Poetess...Justin
Empress Avatar
March 5, 2026 at 6:28 AM
Your comments are so poetic and soul warming to the heart of readers dear justin! I wish i can respond like that to poetry, but to see you are inspired by a poem.. is truly wonderful! Thank you for being supportive, appreciate your kindness. Sending you light always
Lane Avatar
March 2, 2026 at 7:39 AM
Beloved may be the sunrise and prized his warmth at dawn but nothing can be as fulfilling as holding a loved one in your arms. Your alliteration is just enough to illustrate not hinder the romantic emotions you’ve more than adequately evoked. Exceptional writing, as usual.
Empress Avatar
March 2, 2026 at 7:47 AM
Awwn my sweet linnersz, so good to see you today! I know you are traveling but still taking time t support your poetic pals! Now thats true support! Thank you always for being so kind! Im so grateful! And i went a bit crazy alliterating the anguished love between those lovers destined to finally meet and be. Sending you light always sweet talented poetess
Goldsmith Avatar
March 2, 2026 at 7:00 AM
What a powerful write/picture you have here. What a joy to read from the first line to the last line. Yes, when the world weeps we weep but when we weep does the world weep with us??? Have a very blessed day/week writing away............
Empress Avatar
March 2, 2026 at 8:04 AM
What a deep question dear kind soul paula, im grateful for your support. Sending you light always
G  Avatar
March 2, 2026 at 6:25 AM
This is such an encompassing write and painting! You have captured so much about that feeling of fulfilment gained between two entwined souls. Beautiful work <3 fave
Onpaper Avatar
March 2, 2026 at 10:10 AM
lol … it’s a wonderful cocktail of endorphins, adrenalins , dopamins… and more that I can’t even spell or pronounce.. XD
Empress Avatar
March 2, 2026 at 10:03 AM
Im about to have my second cup now! Watch me lolol papii
Onpaper Avatar
March 2, 2026 at 10:02 AM
Hahahah this hibiscus tea sounds very good aee… i encourage u to take more … if this is the effects of 1 cup.. i wonder how it wud be like whn u have it on the regular … XD
Empress Avatar
March 2, 2026 at 9:06 AM
Im done for the day after reading your poem! Gosh! Thats it! I got my poetry doze for the day . Hahaha loved it! I hope u dont get diabetes cus of my sweet talking. I need more hibiscus tea yeap lol
G  Avatar
March 2, 2026 at 8:11 AM
Lucky for me by latest poem is about skulls haha that should stop you in your tracks! I literally saw hibiscus tea in my cupboard this morning and moved it to the back - I'm now afraid of it hahaha!
Empress Avatar
March 2, 2026 at 8:07 AM
Hahahha im a sweet talker. Havent u heard? Hahha lololol i think the hibiscus tea last night tainted my thoughts and iv been tripping ever since. I need to ask my cousin what she put in that tea istg! Im not ok! Im gone! Let me go read you and sugarcoat a little more hahahah
G  Avatar
March 2, 2026 at 7:56 AM
I saw that too and might just hang up my pen! Too amazing :o haha writing this has affected you, stop sweet talking me lol
Empress Avatar
March 2, 2026 at 7:48 AM
Its a prompt on insta on my community too. Ill try start a contest later tnt here on this. Or maybe soon. I want to see what others come up with for this. I saw one poet write on insta and i was like whoa! Amazed! Sending you light today and always my fave poetess
G  Avatar
March 2, 2026 at 6:49 AM
Haha I roared with laughter at you saying anything you write is not immediately head and shoulders above the competition :) I would love to see this as a prompt for sure! <3
Empress Avatar
March 2, 2026 at 6:44 AM
Awwn queen of ekphrasis, im only but a mere echo in your presence ahah. It was a quick scribble and i am in love with this art piece, I think i should set it as a prompt on here. Wat do u think? So grateful for your support. Sending you light always
Liguori Avatar
March 2, 2026 at 6:04 AM
‘I memorized your meteor showers…’. Golly geez; you are quite the romanticist. Your poetry is a joy to read.
Empress Avatar
March 2, 2026 at 7:36 AM
What a most beautiful thing to say. I am so happy you enjoyed my poem! Thank you so very much dear Robert. Sending you light always
Onpaper Avatar
March 2, 2026 at 5:46 AM
When the world weeps and the wound wanes… mmmmm damn papi!!. How you have such a meaningful prompt and turned it in to a whole magical piece of beauty… lamented night bent its empathetic knee to the seraphic sight … mmm love that … picturesque portrait of a passionate promise paradise painted forevermore…mmm absolutely stunning!! Wonderfully woven papi
Empress Avatar
March 2, 2026 at 9:36 AM
Aww papi you my rock! Thank you for reading always! I know how much you struggle with reading but you always do mine! Ill read you too! Sendinv you light always
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