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The Forgotten

The Forgotten Silhouetted shadows that grasp the ground That will never be seen and never be found Within the walls of the lost and hidden Behind the tears of loves forbidden Sheltered silences that mask behind Broken hearts of the eternal mind Surfacing solitudes that tumble in time Discarded dreams that build the blind For the Angels sleep and cries unheard A shadow screams a wounded word For I am here but can not be seen A melting memory in a decaying dream. Nov.28.2016 Unrequited Love - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Nayda Ivette Negron

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Date: 12/19/2016 5:27:00 PM
can't figure it out,lots of choice words,thats all I get.
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Date: 12/15/2016 9:57:00 PM
Just brilliant WW glad to see you shining in top form again! A7
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Date: 12/11/2016 10:47:00 AM
"Sheltered silences that mask behind"...all the things we keep hidden,we create a mask-(like sad things in our lives). "Broken hearts of the eternal mind"...when your heart is broken-it seems that it's going to last forever. "Surfacing solitudes that tumble in time"...having recurring memories of sad situations that trap us in solitude. "Discarded dreams that build the blind"...all the dreams and aspirations we had that never came to be-building a blind, curtain,wall if you will, around you.
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Date: 12/6/2016 7:08:00 AM
Simply fantastic! Every word drips with authenticity. Good luck.
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Date: 11/29/2016 5:42:00 AM
A lovely poem ...
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Date: 11/29/2016 6:15:00 PM
Thank you my friend Probir...god bless...^WW^

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