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The Forest Still Grows Dark, Deep and Lovely

here comes the night,
a deep pitch black,
what's sharper than a ravens call? 
I know not,

ruffled and bothered,
who hears the raven?
it's the witch who hears him,
when he squawks,

her actions are wicked,
as she cackles and cooks,
black ravens fly, 
as she stirs the pot,

her fingers are knobby,
and disfigured,
in all of their joints,
but you needn't fraught,

it's the raven's claw,
she's seeking,
for her spell,
to call out black rot,

as bad as she,
the fungus will grow,
rotting the forest,
wherever she doth trot,

the ravens aware,
that she,
needs his claw,
he'll not be caught,

he hides among the trees,
the branches all twisted,
and disfigured like she,
her cackles within earshot,

the wise old raven,
positions himself,
directly above,
the boiling cauldron pot,

the witch blows in,
pointing her finger at him,
I've got you now!
she thought,

the raven squawked,
"look below old witch,
notice anything new?
I've moved your pot,"

with that he flew,
knocking the witch,
into her own brew,
where she boils and rots,

so listen without fear,
when the raven squawks,
he saved his forest,
and whatnot.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Mchattie Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 4:39 PM
You think ravens are tough, try getting an eye of newt. Great poem. Love the imagery. Have a great day.
Thayer Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 10:50 AM
Haha...Thanks.
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 12:46 PM
Hello Vickie, as I read this poem i could see the scene happening. You do paint a beautiful picture with your words. have a nice day my friend.
Thayer Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 2:02 PM
Thank You Darlene...Your Comment Is Appreciated And Kind. Vickie
Hagy Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 4:11 PM
Wonderful write...love it when a creature saves the day!...love the Eagles too :)
Thayer Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 5:41 PM
Thanks for visiting Chris and the comment, too. Vickie
One Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 7:14 AM
Very dark and deep... no child should have to go through this...
One Avatar
March 25, 2019 at 2:18 AM
Yes...
Thayer Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 5:44 PM
Hi, Silent one...I think maybe you intended this comment for my other poem? My Heart Beats In Pain...(*
Michael Avatar
March 23, 2019 at 7:22 AM
This is nice...I enjoyed it...a few other forest creatures would have been interesting as observers... something is always watching....
Thayer Avatar
March 23, 2019 at 10:10 AM
Thanks Arturo...your feedback is appreciated. Something is always watching is accurately correct.
Vaso Avatar
March 23, 2019 at 1:12 AM
I loved this poem, the music went so well with it!!!
Thayer Avatar
March 23, 2019 at 7:20 AM
Thanks Arthur, The Eagles...from my heyday.
May Avatar
March 22, 2019 at 1:44 PM
A dark, enchanting tale of witches brew..Very nicely penned Vickie..
Thayer Avatar
March 22, 2019 at 5:56 PM
Coming from you it means much...your such a great poet and thanks.
Cunningham Avatar
March 22, 2019 at 1:10 PM
Enjoyed your fantasy verse Vickie great imagination in your write. Tom
Thayer Avatar
March 22, 2019 at 5:57 PM
Glad you enjoyed it Tom and thanks!
Pandit Avatar
March 22, 2019 at 11:21 AM
Enjoyed reading this charming story Vickie..your poem flows in moving dialogue..raven saved the forest.
Thayer Avatar
March 22, 2019 at 11:38 AM
Glad you enjoyed the read Vijay...Thanks.
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