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The Forest of Shadows and Clouds

I drive through the forest of shadows and clouds, thinking out loud, about the wings of buzzards that flap up and down through springtime leaves. I saw three in flight. I’m deft as I creep in my car. A meander of curves on this country bumpkin nook. Mysterious and lovely, this living ghost of trees. The hawks diminish its size, provoke the darkness. I imagine the mean old apple trees and ruby slippers. I coin it The Yellow Brick Road when I drive the kids. It’s what is left when the rest of the land’s been developed. It is a scary and pretty walk, dangerous and playful. I breathe life through the confiture of this unspoiled remnant.

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Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 5/20/2024 4:34:00 PM

Dear Kim, such a beautiful descriptive piece of writing! The title and the opening line created an atmosphere of nostalgia and anticipation. Every word is carefully chosen - thoroughly enjoyed! Love and Hugs~

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2024 5:55:00 PM

Thank you, Mala! Glad you enjoyed the journey through the forest. Hugs ~ Kim

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/20/2024 12:08:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/story. I can see it. What a great ending. Have A Great Day...........

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2024 5:55:00 PM

So glad you enjoyed the imagery! Blessings ~ Kim

Yann Rolland

Date: 5/20/2024 12:54:00 AM

wonderful poem, i felt like children ghosts around, enjoyed your talented poem yann

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2024 6:02:00 AM

Thank you, Yann!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/17/2024 7:10:00 PM

I commensurate with you on the beauty of these country roads I'm never happier than enjoying nature on a rural journey. Your poetic artistry transported me to a place of buzzards and trees full of apples. Thank you for a memorable poem.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/17/2024 8:47:00 PM

Thank you, Hilda!

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 5/17/2024 5:36:00 AM

Forests calm human soul. So interesting smooth read! Have a nice time ~ AA

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/17/2024 8:48:00 PM

Thank you, Abdullah!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/16/2024 4:57:00 PM

a stunning creation, Kim. I loved how you intertwined nature with your imagination. Your reflective tone made this poem meaningful and engaging. I liked 'yellow brick road' -- that was creative. We live on the edge of what was once a small country town now being swallowed by developers. There are a few of those old, winding roads close to our house. I love walking down them wondering what life was like here 100 years ago. Nicely done, KIm! hugs & blessings, Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/16/2024 6:15:00 PM

Thank you, Sara! I loved reading your comment! Have a blessed evening! Hugs ~ Kim

Paige Hind

Date: 5/16/2024 12:29:00 PM

This is very earthy, I cannot think of the right word, but I love your take on mean apple trees, and the end: enjoying the remnant....gorgeous

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/16/2024 1:45:00 PM

Thank you, Paige…love “earthy”

Silent One

Date: 5/16/2024 11:42:00 AM

Your poem is a beautiful picture of nature, imagination, and reflection. It captures the beauty and mystery of a forest journey while inviting deeper contemplation on the relationship between humans and the natural world, the passage of time, and the blending of reality and fantasy. The vivid imagery and evocative language make it a compelling piece that resonates with both sensory and emotional depth.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/16/2024 1:46:00 PM

I so appreciate your comment. Makes my day, Silent! Feeling tired today…headed to my sis’s birthday so will have to read a little bit later. Hugs :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/16/2024 7:31:00 AM

I find forests magical places Kim, have stayed in a few over the years in a forest lodge. Hope your week is going well. Tom

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/16/2024 8:33:00 AM

Thank you, Tom! Have a super week!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/16/2024 6:24:00 AM

A wonderful walk beneath the clouds, my friend. Your imagery brings to fore the gifts of forest in beauty encountered. Excellent write!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/16/2024 6:39:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay! :)