The Forest of Shadows and Clouds

I drive through the forest of shadows and clouds,
thinking out loud, about the wings of buzzards
that flap up and down through springtime leaves.
I saw three in flight. I’m deft as I creep in my car.

A meander of curves on this country bumpkin nook.
Mysterious and lovely, this living ghost of trees.
The hawks diminish its size, provoke the darkness.
I imagine the mean old apple trees and ruby slippers.

I coin it The Yellow Brick Road when I drive the kids.
It’s what is left when the rest of the land’s been developed.
It is a scary and pretty walk, dangerous and playful.
I breathe life through the confiture of this unspoiled remnant.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 4:34 PM
Dear Kim, such a beautiful descriptive piece of writing! The title and the opening line created an atmosphere of nostalgia and anticipation. Every word is carefully chosen - thoroughly enjoyed! Love and Hugs~
Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 5:55 PM
Thank you, Mala! Glad you enjoyed the journey through the forest. Hugs ~ Kim
Goldsmith Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 12:08 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful  write/story. I can see it. What a great ending. Have A Great Day...........
Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 5:55 PM
So glad you enjoyed the imagery! Blessings ~ Kim
Rolland Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 12:54 AM
wonderful poem, i felt like children ghosts around, enjoyed your talented poem yann
Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 6:02 AM
Thank you, Yann!
Greenhough Avatar
May 17, 2024 at 7:10 PM
I commensurate with you on the beauty of these country roads I'm never happier than enjoying nature on a rural journey. Your poetic artistry transported me to a place of buzzards and trees full of apples. Thank you for a memorable poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 17, 2024 at 8:47 PM
Thank you, Hilda!
Alhemaidy Avatar
May 17, 2024 at 5:36 AM
Forests calm human soul. So interesting smooth read! Have a nice time ~ AA
Rodrigues Avatar
May 17, 2024 at 8:48 PM
Thank you, Abdullah!
Hind Avatar
May 16, 2024 at 12:29 PM
This is very earthy, I cannot think of the right word, but I love your take on mean apple trees, and the end: enjoying the remnant....gorgeous
Rodrigues Avatar
May 16, 2024 at 1:45 PM
Thank you, Paige…love “earthy”
One Avatar
May 16, 2024 at 11:42 AM
Your poem is a beautiful picture of nature, imagination, and reflection. It captures the beauty and mystery of a forest journey while inviting deeper contemplation on the relationship between humans and the natural world, the passage of time, and the blending of reality and fantasy. The vivid imagery and evocative language make it a compelling piece that resonates with both sensory and emotional depth.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 16, 2024 at 1:46 PM
I so appreciate your comment. Makes my day, Silent! Feeling tired today…headed to my sis’s birthday so will have to read a little bit later. Hugs :)
Cunningham Avatar
May 16, 2024 at 7:31 AM
I find forests magical places Kim, have stayed in a few over the years in a forest lodge. Hope your week is going well. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
May 16, 2024 at 8:33 AM
Thank you, Tom! Have a super week!
Pandit Avatar
May 16, 2024 at 6:24 AM
A wonderful walk beneath the clouds, my friend. Your imagery brings to fore the gifts of forest in beauty encountered. Excellent write!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 16, 2024 at 6:39 AM
Thank you, Vijay! :)
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