The Flame

my soul was touched and i learned
deep inside this fire burns
i hear her name and it brightens the flame
and this will always be the same
when i have time my memory defines
the things that said she loved me
the little clues that she used
that little thing, the excuse 
the why derived of something
i always thought that time would wait
she knew i loved her but it was too late
to love her enough to let her go
suffer for my sake? no lord no
i traded my tears for her pain
 i traded years for a wonderful flame
everytime i hear her name
a thought a memory and what i gained
we have something that will always be
a deal with death to her from me
from death i gained eturnity
for now they're just memories
but with my memory i keep my love alive
a burning flame that testifies
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Babcock Avatar
September 4, 2013 at 3:54 PM
Well said on what she meant to you on this poem. I am so behind in my comments. I will try and catch up. love phyl
A  Avatar
July 18, 2013 at 9:02 AM
love at first sight doesn't always have a happy ending but it never kills the flame, enjoyed your write,
Johnson Avatar
July 17, 2013 at 4:22 PM
A candle can be burned both ways. It's sad when love is just a phase. What broke your heart cant be undone. When loves a game nobody won.
Jones Avatar
July 16, 2013 at 8:49 PM
We ave something that will always be....love that line especially..but the whole thing is awesome.I guess everyone has that person who they never get over....great job..
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