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The First Time

The first time I saw his smile I fell in love....and I knew I would love him forever.





by Francine Roberts
for Constances "One Amazing Line" contest

Copyright © Francine Roberts | Year Posted 2010

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Robert Pettit Date: 1/11/2011 9:15:00 PM It may be just one line, but you have said a lot with it. Good entry. Login to Reply

Iolanda Scripca Date: 12/16/2010 7:57:00 PM Great Monoku here, dear Francine. Congratulations on a well deserved win. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/16/2010 3:08:00 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara Login to Reply

Daniel Cwiak Date: 12/15/2010 8:46:00 AM Love seems to be the theme running throughout the contest. This is truly an awesomely simple write which expresses that theme, Francine. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C Login to Reply

Deb Radke Date: 12/15/2010 8:38:00 AM Oh, I love this monoku. That is exactly what can happen, isn't it. And you have put it so well in one short line. Very good. Congratulations on your win. Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 12/15/2010 8:26:00 AM Francind, Congratulations on your well-earned win in the contest! Blessings, joy and peace to you and yours! Love, Audrey Login to Reply

Eamon Duffin Date: 12/15/2010 6:58:00 AM Hi. Congratulations on your deserved win in the 'One Amazing Line', contest. Eamon Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 12/15/2010 3:43:00 AM best wishes on your well-deserved award! enjoy… nette Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 12/14/2010 10:54:00 PM Many congratulations Francine for this win. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/14/2010 9:52:00 PM This one is very sweet and cute. Francine. Congratulations! LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 12/14/2010 7:42:00 PM Congrats Francine on your super win in the One Liner contest with this eloquent line.. enjoy another top ten sweet victory my friend with luv.. Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 12/14/2010 5:54:00 PM Congratulations Francine, on your worthy presentation. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 12/14/2010 2:50:00 PM A beautiful Monoku Francine, many congratulations on your win in Constance's fine contest >> James :) Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 12/14/2010 5:55:00 AM Congratulations Francine on your win in Constance's "One Amazing Line" contest. Love, Carol Login to Reply

David Smalling Date: 12/9/2010 4:57:00 AM I knew there were smiles like that ... with hooks in them. Saw one myself and never moved again. All the best in the contest. Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 12/9/2010 12:10:00 AM so profound Francine, awesome. Harry Login to Reply

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway Date: 12/8/2010 1:01:00 PM so heartfelt... a once in a lifetime experience...Lay Login to Reply

Diane Locksley Date: 12/7/2010 11:54:00 AM This is the magical moment I hope to find someday. I love your entry Francine. Good luck in the contest! Login to Reply

Joy Wellington Date: 12/6/2010 8:14:00 PM Thanks Francine, and good luck to you too in this contest with this amazing one line, one whole love story. Looks like a winner from where I stand. Blessings Joy (Jew) Login to Reply

Rick Rucker Date: 12/6/2010 7:10:00 PM How lovely! Thanks for the kind comments. Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 12/6/2010 2:56:00 PM Beautiful one liner Francine, dreamy it is. Good luck in Constance's contest >> James :) Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 12/6/2010 1:27:00 PM Nice feelings of love well expressed, Francine. Good luck Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 12/6/2010 12:13:00 PM Beautiful write for the contest Francine.. All the best to you ;-) Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 12/6/2010 12:06:00 PM This is just how it happened for me with my late husband, Francine. Some people don't believe in love at first sight, but sometimes we just know a bond will keep us in each other's hearts. Excellent entry for Constance's contest. Best wishes for success! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Anthony Barrow Date: 12/6/2010 11:02:00 AM beautiful one liner Login to Reply

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