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The First Time

The first time I saw his smile I fell in love....and I knew I would love him forever. by Francine Roberts for Constances "One Amazing Line" contest

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Robert Pettit

Date: 1/11/2011 9:15:00 PM

It may be just one line, but you have said a lot with it. Good entry.

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 12/16/2010 7:57:00 PM

Great Monoku here, dear Francine. Congratulations on a well deserved win.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/16/2010 3:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 12/15/2010 8:46:00 AM

Love seems to be the theme running throughout the contest. This is truly an awesomely simple write which expresses that theme, Francine. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Deb Radke

Date: 12/15/2010 8:38:00 AM

Oh, I love this monoku. That is exactly what can happen, isn't it. And you have put it so well in one short line. Very good. Congratulations on your win.

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/15/2010 8:26:00 AM

Francind, Congratulations on your well-earned win in the contest! Blessings, joy and peace to you and yours! Love, Audrey

Eamon Duffin

Date: 12/15/2010 6:58:00 AM

Hi. Congratulations on your deserved win in the 'One Amazing Line', contest. Eamon

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/15/2010 3:43:00 AM

best wishes on your well-deserved award! enjoy… nette

Tahera Mannan

Date: 12/14/2010 10:54:00 PM

Many congratulations Francine for this win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2010 9:52:00 PM

This one is very sweet and cute. Francine. Congratulations! LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/14/2010 7:42:00 PM

Congrats Francine on your super win in the One Liner contest with this eloquent line.. enjoy another top ten sweet victory my friend with luv..

John Freeman

Date: 12/14/2010 5:54:00 PM

Congratulations Francine, on your worthy presentation. Agape, Moses

James Fraser

Date: 12/14/2010 2:50:00 PM

A beautiful Monoku Francine, many congratulations on your win in Constance's fine contest >> James :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/14/2010 5:55:00 AM

Congratulations Francine on your win in Constance's "One Amazing Line" contest. Love, Carol

David Smalling

Date: 12/9/2010 4:57:00 AM

I knew there were smiles like that ... with hooks in them. Saw one myself and never moved again. All the best in the contest.

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/9/2010 12:10:00 AM

so profound Francine, awesome. Harry

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

Date: 12/8/2010 1:01:00 PM

so heartfelt... a once in a lifetime experience...Lay

Diane Locksley

Date: 12/7/2010 11:54:00 AM

This is the magical moment I hope to find someday. I love your entry Francine. Good luck in the contest!

Joy Wellington

Date: 12/6/2010 8:14:00 PM

Thanks Francine, and good luck to you too in this contest with this amazing one line, one whole love story. Looks like a winner from where I stand. Blessings Joy (Jew)

Rick Rucker

Date: 12/6/2010 7:10:00 PM

How lovely! Thanks for the kind comments.

James Fraser

Date: 12/6/2010 2:56:00 PM

Beautiful one liner Francine, dreamy it is. Good luck in Constance's contest >> James :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/6/2010 1:27:00 PM

Nice feelings of love well expressed, Francine. Good luck

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/6/2010 12:13:00 PM

Beautiful write for the contest Francine.. All the best to you ;-)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/6/2010 12:06:00 PM

This is just how it happened for me with my late husband, Francine. Some people don't believe in love at first sight, but sometimes we just know a bond will keep us in each other's hearts. Excellent entry for Constance's contest. Best wishes for success! Love, Carolyn

Anthony Barrow

Date: 12/6/2010 11:02:00 AM

beautiful one liner