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The First Sign of Spring

The ice crystals that glistened like diamonds throughout the winter months—December, January, February—slowly melted away and the crunchy green grass, now supple and bright, slowed to make way for the fall’s bulbs to send up shoots and bud. The tiny pink crocus shouts, “I’m here! I’m here! Notice me!” And, so I do. I stop and gently touch the lovely, fragile petals and wonder how they had survived since last September when I had buried them five inches into the topsoil.
A crocus called out
"I am alive, look at me!"
Spring has surely come.
TENTH PLACE WINNER Written March 9, 2021 for Springtime Haibun Contest Sponsored by M. L. Kiser

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Date: 4/20/2021 8:19:00 AM
Very descriptive work. Way to go. Congrats on your winner. Sara
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/20/2021 8:47:00 AM
Thanks so much, Sara.
Date: 3/10/2021 6:25:00 PM
Every lawn fnatic's dread has arrived early this year – dandelions! Late Middle English: from French dent-de-lion, translation of medieval Latin dens leonis ‘lion's tooth’ (because of the jagged shape of the leaves, not the yellow flowers.). They don't show up until end of April. The leaves are edible and very nutritious. / Maurice
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/10/2021 7:15:00 PM
Focus, Maurice, crocus! LOL Anyway, I love dandelions and do not purposely pull them out of my yard. They are lovely among the violets that bloom about the same time. Thanks for your visit and your comments.
Date: 3/9/2021 9:29:00 AM
So nicely penned. Especially "A crocus called out "I am alive, look at me!"" Wow!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/9/2021 9:57:00 AM
Yep, so true. One single tiny crocus among some other plants popped up quite suddenly, and I noticed her. What a treat after a crippling snowstorm. How did she do it???
Date: 3/9/2021 9:15:00 AM
Oh I do await anxiously the first signs of color that they bring. Great stuff. God Bless, JB
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/9/2021 9:58:00 AM
Thanks, Judy. So true!
Date: 3/8/2021 5:14:00 PM
This is well done, from start to finish. Very strong haiku. :)
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/8/2021 8:44:00 PM
Thanks so much, P.S. I appreciate your thoughtfulness.
Date: 3/8/2021 1:51:00 PM
this is how I like them. Short and SO sweet!!!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/8/2021 3:00:00 PM
I do, too, Andrea. I love the crocuses!

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