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The Fire Inside

I pace the floor in a downward spiral; sinking down to the floor. I burst into feelings of worry, anxiety my head in my hands weighed down with the fire inside. I am swallowed down by rot, smothered in riddles feeble, shallow, and weak. Dare you to transform me; I decline to be in a sea of roaring waves to drown me in a flood of tears. No longer pretending all will be well. Times I felt so alone. Through it all I've learned strength I've learned to depend in my Lord wise and graceful as he is divine. 11/12/2017

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Date: 11/16/2017 12:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well written.
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Date: 11/15/2017 7:30:00 AM
So well portrayed and honest, Eve, congratulations on your win:)
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Date: 11/15/2017 2:37:00 AM
Nicely done, Eve. Great imagery and message. Congratulations on your win! Regards, John.
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Date: 11/14/2017 10:59:00 PM
Congrats, Eve. I don't know your placement but I see you won, and that was well deserved.
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Date: 11/14/2017 10:18:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Eve, indeed there can be no hope through the bad times without the Lord. Viv x
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Date: 11/14/2017 3:30:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Eve! Hugs and smiles :)
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Date: 11/14/2017 1:19:00 PM
Hi Eve...I see that this is a high-placed winning poem, and I understand why! You put your heart into it; despite all the problems and anxiety there is hope for those who live in faith. Warm regards // paul
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Date: 11/14/2017 6:00:00 AM
Worry ends when faith begins and God is always there...Especiallt when all others have left ..Wn emotive deep poem...
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Date: 11/14/2017 4:57:00 AM
Beautiful write, Eve, congrats on your well-earned win, friend. Blessings! :-)
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Date: 11/14/2017 1:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Eve.
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Date: 11/13/2017 10:35:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Eve.
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Date: 11/13/2017 6:57:00 PM
Such a wonderfully fulfilling ending to this poem that finished with faithful wisdom.
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Date: 11/13/2017 5:08:00 AM
That's correct my friend, lean on the Lord and all his strength and you can make it through anything, for He is always with you and is the pillar of strength! He will never give you something you can't handle, and if there is something out there that is beyond your capabilities to make it through...He sends his angels to lift you up and take you through...trust me I know...I've been there myself my friend! This is a very powerful piece, one that I really enjoyed reading, Great Work!!
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Date: 11/12/2017 11:22:00 PM
All that goes well in the end is what matters. Nice poem, Eve.
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Date: 11/12/2017 9:04:00 PM
Very vivid and expressive poem, I could feel the emotions, and sure know what is "anxiety" Hugs!
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Date: 11/12/2017 5:35:00 PM
Pretty vivid imagery in this splendid piece. Well done, Eve:-)!
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Date: 11/12/2017 5:29:00 PM
I have a huge lump reading this emotional words, its such a personal poem Eve, you have overcome battles in the past and your faith will continue pull you through :-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/12/2017 5:12:00 PM
Eve, you bring your past to life so well in your poetry. I understand how healing it must be. Good luck in the contest.
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