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The Final Battle

The bottle was full Just like their spirits They shared as the talk grew louder Spoke of times when drinking was sociable That was a time ago Now the drink was a necessity The medicine of life The bottle was beginning to empty now Just like the existence they led You could see it in their faces As the battle for the last drink intensified Every battle has a winner This time he was the stronger Gulping down the last drop as if his life depended on it There would be many more battles like this Ultimately, the main battle lay ahead The final one The freezing weather moved in slowly Though he was totally unaware Lying in a drunken stupor Surrounded by empty bottles Screaming as the battle raged inside him Fighting for the final time As his life slowly ebbed away The snow covered him like a blanket Peacefully taking him to a new place The battle over His thirty five year old existence finally at an end.

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Date: 7/29/2023 3:37:00 AM
Good Morning Paul. Hello. Please allow me to let your entry stand. This is nothing I could add to this. I read your words twice. This is very sad which makes it beautiful poetry. Once again you have executed an entry that must be read out loud slowly with emphasis and feeling. It was an honor turning to your page and skilled talent. Have a wonderful morning and weekend. Blessings (smile)
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Paul Bell
Date: 7/30/2023 3:35:00 AM
You too, Lisa, be good.
Date: 7/23/2023 9:56:00 AM
The end lurks behind everyone. We wonder if it is going to be a smooth slipping away into a different world or after waging a real battle. Great poem, dear friend
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Paul Bell
Date: 7/24/2023 8:38:00 AM
Definitely sad for some.
Date: 7/22/2023 3:15:00 PM
Sad tale, Paul, but good poetry. It may be closer for all of us than we think. Thanks for sharing your thoughts throu poetry. Have a great weekend! Bill
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Paul Bell
Date: 7/23/2023 1:21:00 AM
Thanks, Bill, you too.
Date: 7/22/2023 12:35:00 PM
The downward spiral begins, and still a young man. Lovely short story, Paul.
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Paul Bell
Date: 7/23/2023 1:20:00 AM
Drink sure does take hope and life from some.
Date: 7/16/2023 2:32:00 PM
a dismal demise..so many end up this way
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Paul Bell
Date: 7/19/2023 3:01:00 AM
It is sad, and drink is so easy to get.

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