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The Farm Boy

amidst the green field behind grandpa’s old brick house lies a broken fridge, unmindful of time passing until my mom calls me home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/27/2019 7:22:00 AM
Very well written!
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Date: 3/30/2011 8:33:00 AM
i loved this poem, takes me back to my younger days. i see you have not posted any poems for a while, i like your style.
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Date: 1/28/2011 4:29:00 PM
Hey, where have you been Otsenre? I still love this poem here!
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Date: 11/22/2010 6:42:00 AM
This made me smile-- wonderful thoughts on childhood you have here -- and I sure was wondering whether you were Pinoy? Are you? Since you figured out my jejemon write so well-- and then I read down below and read you are Ernesto! You sure got me-- clever way of reversing your name-- it looks so cool too! Thanks for dropping by my poems, I hope to read new ones from you too :) --nikko :)
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Date: 5/28/2010 3:27:00 PM
Good job in the contest, Otsenre. This one had great nostalgia. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 5/28/2010 9:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Tanka Me" contest Ernesto. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/28/2010 2:28:00 AM
Congratulations Otsenre, Days of remembering..well done...Margaret
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Date: 5/27/2010 2:25:00 PM
Excellent use of this form and your thoughts. Congrats on your success in the contest. BG
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Date: 5/23/2010 12:50:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Otsenre.Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/22/2010 1:52:00 PM
I love tanka(s) and this is so beautiful..Charma.
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Date: 5/21/2010 5:11:00 PM
Well penned tanka with nice expressions
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