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The Falls of Life

Cascade of blue, flows Green mosses, grace nature's rocks The trees drink in toast For Raul's contest " Rhythm of the Falls " http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/nature-5.php

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/17/2009 10:52:00 AM

James.. great wording to this poem... I can almost see it all.. thankxxx for your comment on my Color Line poem... he was my ex boyfriend that I rode truck with... I was very proud of this relationship ... and we turned lots of heads too... it only served to give me inspiration... to break the barriers of color ...

Elaine George

Date: 10/12/2009 6:27:00 AM

Beautiful! James. Best wishes in Raul's contest. Love, Lainie

James Peranteau

Date: 10/12/2009 3:19:00 AM

Mr. Fraser,..this is one fantastic Haiku sir !!!!!! james

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/11/2009 12:26:00 PM

Liked how you depicted the falls as part of a celebration :) Beautiful haiku! Good luck in the contest :)

Jayne Eggins

Date: 10/10/2009 8:56:00 AM

This ones a beauty James good luck in the contest !! love Jayne

Jared Pickett

Date: 10/8/2009 10:42:00 AM

"The trees drink in toast"..... Nice description James.....:JP]

Marty Owens

Date: 10/8/2009 9:44:00 AM

Oh and good luck on the contest...Marty

Marty Owens

Date: 10/8/2009 9:43:00 AM

Nice...Loved reading it. Marty

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/8/2009 7:48:00 AM

Oh, how lovely the highlands must be this time of year as "The trees drink in toast." Marvelous description in this excellent haiku, James! Good luck in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/8/2009 6:34:00 AM

Wishing you the best in Raul's contest James with this beautiful poem. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/8/2009 6:24:00 AM

Beautiful. I know that the green around enjoying the toast. Keep writing. Sara

Sean Kelly

Date: 10/8/2009 1:29:00 AM

Sláinte , Highlander , and the best of luck in the contest as you really captured the picture , perfectly ....

Donna Golden

Date: 10/7/2009 11:05:00 PM

Sweet, refreshing cascade....very satisfying Haiku, James! Hugs, Donna

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/7/2009 9:09:00 PM

The trees drink in toast--very original James,i just love it--Charma

Date: 10/7/2009 4:21:00 PM

Beautiful use of imagery for a peaceful feeling poem. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Keep up the good writing. Karen

Adell Foster

Date: 10/7/2009 3:09:00 PM

This is a lovely interpretaion ofthe falls, I thank you James for sharing the read. Best wishes in the contest :-) Many Blessings, Always, Adell

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/7/2009 3:02:00 PM

This is wonderful..so many ways to describe this beautiful scene. I love the last line. BG