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The Falls of Life

Cascade of blue, flows
Green mosses, grace nature's rocks
The trees drink in toast


For Raul's contest " Rhythm of the Falls " 



http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/nature-5.php

Copyright © James Fraser | Year Posted 2009

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 10/17/2009 10:52:00 AM James.. great wording to this poem... I can almost see it all.. thankxxx for your comment on my Color Line poem... he was my ex boyfriend that I rode truck with... I was very proud of this relationship ... and we turned lots of heads too... it only served to give me inspiration... to break the barriers of color ... Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 10/12/2009 6:27:00 AM Beautiful! James. Best wishes in Raul's contest. Love, Lainie Login to Reply

James Peranteau Date: 10/12/2009 3:19:00 AM Mr. Fraser,..this is one fantastic Haiku sir !!!!!! james Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 10/11/2009 12:26:00 PM Liked how you depicted the falls as part of a celebration :) Beautiful haiku! Good luck in the contest :) Login to Reply

Jayne Eggins Date: 10/10/2009 8:56:00 AM This ones a beauty James good luck in the contest !! love Jayne Login to Reply

Jared Pickett Date: 10/8/2009 10:42:00 AM "The trees drink in toast"..... Nice description James.....:JP] Login to Reply

Marty Owens Date: 10/8/2009 9:44:00 AM Oh and good luck on the contest...Marty Login to Reply

Marty Owens Date: 10/8/2009 9:43:00 AM Nice...Loved reading it. Marty Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 10/8/2009 7:48:00 AM Oh, how lovely the highlands must be this time of year as "The trees drink in toast." Marvelous description in this excellent haiku, James! Good luck in the contest! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 10/8/2009 6:34:00 AM Wishing you the best in Raul's contest James with this beautiful poem. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/8/2009 6:24:00 AM Beautiful. I know that the green around enjoying the toast. Keep writing. Sara Login to Reply

Sean Kelly Date: 10/8/2009 1:29:00 AM Sláinte , Highlander , and the best of luck in the contest as you really captured the picture , perfectly .... Login to Reply

Donna Golden Date: 10/7/2009 11:05:00 PM Sweet, refreshing cascade....very satisfying Haiku, James! Hugs, Donna Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 10/7/2009 9:09:00 PM The trees drink in toast--very original James,i just love it--Charma Login to Reply

Date: 10/7/2009 4:21:00 PM Beautiful use of imagery for a peaceful feeling poem. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Keep up the good writing. Karen Login to Reply

Adell Foster Date: 10/7/2009 3:09:00 PM This is a lovely interpretaion ofthe falls, I thank you James for sharing the read. Best wishes in the contest :-) Many Blessings, Always, Adell Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 10/7/2009 3:02:00 PM This is wonderful..so many ways to describe this beautiful scene. I love the last line. BG Login to Reply