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The Fallen Prince - Part 2 (Reformated)

Through tear-filled eyes- He saw a herd- Of royal beauty stallions- And perched upon- Their royal backs- Were knights In white- So gallant- Carefully- They scooped him up- And carried him away- Into the East- They rode from hell- For three Long nights and days- When long at last- With horses spent- They reached Their destination- They placed him in The hands of God- For this was His creation- Great warmth Began To fill his heart- White light Shone from his eyes- He felt the gentle Hand of God- And he began to cry- Such happiness He had never known- It lifted him so high- He spread his wings Up to the sky- And he began to fly- Up to the sky- On mended wings- With angels All around him- He heard the voice Of God ring out- And totally surround him- I’ve done my part- My fallen prince- But the rest is up To you- Fly straight and true- And don’t look back- No matter What you do- Lead not thee to- Temptation son- For if you do- You’ll die- Fly straight and true- My fallen prince- Or forever- Cease to fly- Will the prince Journey home again- To his fair and lovely maiden- Or will temptation- Lead him back- To the evil- Black Knight SATAN---------

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/15/2010 1:28:00 PM
OOOOH, great ending line with Satan, Lainie. I was waiting for that final close rhyme, and there it came WHAM. Well, i am sure your novel is gonna be stunning since you have such a great talent for story telling, and I hope the "knight" is ok now?? (I think you told me no?) Luv ya, Andrea
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Date: 6/14/2008 10:57:00 AM
This is so a brilliantly written piece. I like the flow of the words and the message. This is so inspiring. Hopefully, you book tour is going well. It sounds so exciting. Great job! ~ Joseph
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