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The Fairy

Mistaken for a butterfly, Perhaps a humming-bird; Seen from the corner of an eye, When a tiny buzz is heard. Only the young or young at heart, Will be quick enough to see The little fairy dip and dart, Unrevealed to you and me. But mayhap when she takes a rest And pauses on a leaf. The aged eye will chance to spy This sight beyond belief.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/20/2013 9:34:00 PM
Hello Joyce, nice Fairy Dust, winning poem........... love ~SKAT~
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Date: 10/17/2013 9:05:00 PM
I would have placed this much higher..its very sweet..congrats ..BG
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Date: 10/17/2013 11:45:00 AM
Congrad's on your verse winning! Light & Love
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Date: 10/17/2013 11:02:00 AM
Joyce, your poem is cute and clever..love the win... Linda
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Date: 10/16/2013 10:36:00 PM
congrats.nate
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Date: 7/10/2011 9:31:00 AM
Truly magical, Joyce. I love the intelligent, thought-provoking approach you took to this challenge. Perhaps there is some truth in fairies only being visible to the young at heart. I have no idea where to begin writing for this contest, but you created a gem. Outstanding work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/9/2011 8:26:00 AM
Beautiful.....Brought a smile to my face.
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Date: 7/8/2011 6:17:00 PM
You can feel the fantasy of this write. Love the imagery and creativity. Enjoyed this very much Joyce!
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Date: 7/8/2011 6:04:00 PM
good luck to the contest...hope you'll win....i will also try to make an entry for it....looking forward to see you in the winners' list...*_*junjun
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