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An old women bent over her shopping cart, she is a solitary recluse, cut off from the world; there is no one at home waiting, her existence full of tattered memories. An old man goes for a coffee each day, always by himself, forlorn, sad, withdrawn; the only person he talks to is the waitress, her smile is his only joy. Loneliness is the emptiness of many souls, having chosen to live a life secluded; they walk this world just shadows of the past, living within their heartbreaks and sorrows. Loneliness is an old person dying alone, but, it was not always this way, oh, so much love once- now just distant thoughts, forgotten . . . ____________________________ October 10, 2013 Poetry/Verse/The Faces of Loneliness Copyright Protected, ID 13-1016-864-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Submitted to the End April Premiere Contest sponsor, Brian Strand Seventh Place

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Date: 4/27/2018 8:28:00 PM
The sadness of the world, lovely.
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Date: 4/27/2018 10:48:00 AM
You image this deep sadness so well with your paintbrush of words, Constance. Congratulations on your fine placement on this short list of winners. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/26/2018 9:50:00 AM
I like this-- it shows the great heart of the poet, filled with that sadness part and parcel of human sentience.
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Date: 4/26/2018 11:04:00 AM
LJ thank you for the nice comment
Date: 4/26/2018 7:22:00 AM
Congrats on your placement, Constance.
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Date: 4/26/2018 11:03:00 AM
Agnes thank you for the congratulations
Date: 4/25/2018 11:35:00 PM
Congrats on your touching poem, BW. Beautifully penned.
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Date: 4/26/2018 11:02:00 AM
Line thank you for the congratulations and the beautiful
Date: 4/25/2018 10:05:00 PM
Congrats Constance.
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Date: 4/26/2018 11:01:00 AM
Rob thank you for the congratulations
Date: 4/25/2018 4:53:00 PM
Well written BW. You have shown it well. The loneliness can run so deep.. Have a nice evening :)
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Date: 4/26/2018 11:01:00 AM
Heidi thank you for visiting my poem and for the wonderful comment

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