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The Eyes Have It

It is moon You pull The charm is inexorable You have to respond and go up What do waves do When you release Waves fall To come back In Another hiss Another bliss Two deep clueless radiant blue balls Your beauty’s clue Your wisdom’s hue Your sorrow’s dew It has loved It has guided It has charmed It has created It has destroyed The eyes have it I’m an addict ___________________________________ July 12, 2017// For Daniel Turner's Contest

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 7/12/2017 4:47:00 PM

Exceptional mixing of lunar and optical forces that pull at our emotional core, Probir. Your creative prowess shines once again. Splendid poem. Love and peace.

Eve Roper

Date: 7/12/2017 8:07:00 AM

Nicely done, Probir, vision has the ability to process visual detail , I would never ever want to lose that part of me..Good luck in the contest. ~*

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/12/2017 7:58:00 AM

The eyes can show so much. You have displayed this well and left with a punch of an ending. Well done Probir :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/12/2017 8:04:00 AM

Thank you ... Actually it is a longer poem ... I was about to post it as such ... But alas, just 20 lines permitted by the sponsor... There was no time ... mine was the last of 35 ... the editing had to be quick ... and the result, among others, the addict ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/12/2017 7:54:00 AM

Into the eyes the agony and pain are reflected my friend, Probir! Superbly written! Good luck!

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/12/2017 8:05:00 AM

Right most likely ... But the eyes have it indeed ... thank you, dear friend ...