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The Eyes Have It

Your eyes bring forth summers rain
That cools my heart on lovers plain

Emerald eyes of crystalline spheres
Missing you brings cascading tears

Your eyes bring forth the love within
My heart jumps out and heads in spin

Your eyes penetrate my very being
Sensual shapes of seductive seeing

Your enchanted eyes of life’s mystery
An enigma smile staring back at me

In your eyes my weakened soul
Surrendering servant of love you stole

And now your eyes slowly close
Sleep my love on petals rose.




July.09.2017
The Eyes Have It - Contest
Sponsored by: Daniel Turner

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/13/2017 12:36:00 AM
As I said before, this is a sweet write, ^WW^, congratulations:)
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Date: 7/12/2017 8:41:00 PM
Congratulations WW! :)
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Date: 7/12/2017 7:42:00 PM
Congratulations on this winning couplet.
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Date: 7/12/2017 5:18:00 PM
Back to congratulate you , an awesome win..... ~*
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Date: 7/12/2017 4:12:00 PM
I really love your entry WW. Your ending is perfect! Congratulations on your wonderful win! : )
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Date: 7/12/2017 12:50:00 PM
WW, Congrats to you on your fine win
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Date: 7/12/2017 12:04:00 PM
Hey great write WW, congrats on a fine placement! Emerald eyes of crystalline spheres...that's first class writing!
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Date: 7/12/2017 11:48:00 AM
Congratulations with this romantic poem
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Date: 7/12/2017 10:06:00 AM
Congratulations, Winged Warrior on your placement in my contest. When I saw the names beside the winner's list, this surprised me as you usually use alliteration. Wonderful poem. I love it:)
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Date: 7/10/2017 9:10:00 AM
This is absolutely sweet, ^WW^:) your description of such eyes make me wish for them:)
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Date: 7/9/2017 1:09:00 PM
love the imagery, and the theme... good luck in Daniel's contest. ~*
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Winged Warrior
Date: 7/9/2017 1:11:00 PM
Thank you Eve...all the best my friend...^WW^
Date: 7/9/2017 12:51:00 PM
Very romantic couplet, Winged Warrior! I wish you the best of luck in the contest. :)
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Winged Warrior
Date: 7/9/2017 12:57:00 PM
Thank you so much Alyssa...god bless...^WW^

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