Frederic Parker Poet Sonnet

The Eyes Have It

To kiss your eyes with mine, my eyelids lift
And find emotions rise, in flickering trace
Warm and flameless fires smolder with their gift
To capture heartfelt needs from their embrace
We will sigh as our lover's eyes unite
To drift away in a silent tether
Hands held tenderly, as our hearts hold tight
So our dreams and wishes dance together
We'll cross unmeasured distance in-between
And drink from lover's orbs amorous wine
To share a kiss so deep in time serene
Our flame fed souls burn as the eyes entwine

  The only sacred space where love concedes
  When it melts the eyes with its flaming needs


7/7/17 contest The Eyes have it

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Joanna Daniel July 13, 2017 at 12:32 AM Very beautiful and touching, Frederic, congratulations:)

Kim Rodrigues July 13, 2017 at 12:19 AM So beautiful, Freddie! Congrats!

Heidi Sands July 12, 2017 at 8:37 PM Congratulations Frederic! Excellent :)

Janis Medders Tobechi July 12, 2017 at 7:33 PM Congratulations on your win. Truly deserved.

Eve Roper July 12, 2017 at 5:15 PM Frederic, a great romantic written poem, congratulations on your win..... ~*

Alona Perlin July 12, 2017 at 4:04 PM Very touching poem! I truly enjoyed reading it. Well deserved win! Congratulations.

Connie Marcum Wong July 12, 2017 at 3:36 PM A love sonnet, how perfect for the contest! This is spectacular and a deserving First Placement Frederic! Congratulations! One of your most romantic writes! : )

Andrea Dietrich July 12, 2017 at 3:19 PM FANTASTIC win, Frederic. Take a bow! And congratulations.

Nette Onclaud July 12, 2017 at 1:05 PM okay, you got me swooning here, frederick... sweet congrats on your award!..huggs

White Wolf July 12, 2017 at 12:06 PM Brilliant piece, Frederic! Top win, mate. Congrats

John Hamilton July 12, 2017 at 11:50 AM This is one of your best, although it's hard to choose, this one is special as reflected in your first place win! Romantic writes like this are hard to find!

Janice Canerdy July 12, 2017 at 11:11 AM Frederic, CONGRATS on your top win with this beautiful sonnet! Janice

Winged Warrior July 12, 2017 at 10:38 AM Congrats!!! my friend...superb entry...^WW^

Dale Gregory Cozart July 12, 2017 at 9:58 AM Gorgeous. Congrats on your 1st Place win!

Daniel Turner July 12, 2017 at 9:55 AM Congratulations Frederic on your winning write. I loved everything about your sonnet. Thank you for such a wonderful entry and for participating in my contest. Frederic Parker July 12, 2017 at 11:38 AM Thank you, Daniel, it was a pleasure to enter

Andrea Dietrich July 11, 2017 at 6:56 PM VERY romantic. The romantic approach is just what Danny wanted!

Craig Cornish July 8, 2017 at 12:54 PM You old romantic you! This sonnet is definitely a chick magnet.

Eileen Manassian July 8, 2017 at 12:35 PM BRILLIANT! Absolutely BRILLIANT! You have such a way with words! :) The eyes can have intercourse way before bodies intertwine.

Agnes Krampe July 8, 2017 at 11:15 AM Beautiful romantic sonnet, Frederic. Good luck in the contest.

Alyssa Lorette July 7, 2017 at 10:02 PM Beautiful sonnet, Frederic! Good luck! :)

Chris Green July 7, 2017 at 4:54 PM This was enchantingly beautiful Frederic. I see a winner here.

Heidi Sands July 7, 2017 at 4:51 PM So very nice Frederic. Good luck in the contest! :)