The Eyes Have It Premiere Contest Winner

To kiss your eyes with mine, my eyelids lift
And find emotions rise, in flickering trace
Warm and flameless fires smolder with their gift
To capture heartfelt needs from their embrace
We will sigh as our lover's eyes unite
To drift away in a silent tether
Hands held tenderly, as our hearts hold tight
So our dreams and wishes dance together
We'll cross unmeasured distance in-between
And drink from lover's orbs amorous wine
To share a kiss so deep in time serene
Our flame fed souls burn as the eyes entwine

  The only sacred space where love concedes
  When it melts the eyes with its flaming needs


7/7/17 contest The Eyes have it

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Date: 7/13/2017 12:32:00 AM
Very beautiful and touching, Frederic, congratulations:)
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Date: 7/13/2017 12:19:00 AM
So beautiful, Freddie! Congrats!
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Date: 7/12/2017 8:37:00 PM
Congratulations Frederic! Excellent :)
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Date: 7/12/2017 7:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Truly deserved.
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Date: 7/12/2017 5:15:00 PM
Frederic, a great romantic written poem, congratulations on your win..... ~*
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Date: 7/12/2017 4:04:00 PM
Very touching poem! I truly enjoyed reading it. Well deserved win! Congratulations.
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Date: 7/12/2017 3:36:00 PM
A love sonnet, how perfect for the contest! This is spectacular and a deserving First Placement Frederic! Congratulations! One of your most romantic writes! : )
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Date: 7/12/2017 3:19:00 PM
FANTASTIC win, Frederic. Take a bow! And congratulations.
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Date: 7/12/2017 1:05:00 PM
okay, you got me swooning here, frederick... sweet congrats on your award!..huggs
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Date: 7/12/2017 12:06:00 PM
Brilliant piece, Frederic! Top win, mate. Congrats
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Date: 7/12/2017 11:50:00 AM
This is one of your best, although it's hard to choose, this one is special as reflected in your first place win! Romantic writes like this are hard to find!
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Date: 7/12/2017 11:11:00 AM
Frederic, CONGRATS on your top win with this beautiful sonnet! Janice
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Date: 7/12/2017 10:38:00 AM
Congrats!!! my friend...superb entry...^WW^
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Date: 7/12/2017 9:58:00 AM
Gorgeous. Congrats on your 1st Place win!
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Date: 7/12/2017 9:55:00 AM
Congratulations Frederic on your winning write. I loved everything about your sonnet. Thank you for such a wonderful entry and for participating in my contest.
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Date: 7/12/2017 11:38:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel, it was a pleasure to enter
Date: 7/11/2017 6:56:00 PM
VERY romantic. The romantic approach is just what Danny wanted!
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Date: 7/8/2017 12:54:00 PM
You old romantic you! This sonnet is definitely a chick magnet.
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Date: 7/8/2017 12:35:00 PM
BRILLIANT! Absolutely BRILLIANT! You have such a way with words! :) The eyes can have intercourse way before bodies intertwine.
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Date: 7/8/2017 11:15:00 AM
Beautiful romantic sonnet, Frederic. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 7/7/2017 10:02:00 PM
Beautiful sonnet, Frederic! Good luck! :)
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Date: 7/7/2017 4:54:00 PM
This was enchantingly beautiful Frederic. I see a winner here.
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Date: 7/7/2017 4:51:00 PM
So very nice Frederic. Good luck in the contest! :)
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