The Evacuee
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Thanks to Andrea Dietrich for her advice in getting my first sentence correct for my first enjambment poem.
With your teary eyes fixed on me
we walked to the station; your little
hand glued firmly to mine. No words
passed between us – just a deathly silence
as the train arrived. We tightly embrace;
my heart was breaking but I smiled;
said I would see you again soon,
with your teary eyes fixed on me
10~22~14
Contest 8 lines 7 words enjambment
Sponsor Rick Parise
~awarded 3rd place~
Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2014
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