The Essence of Solitude

In subtle silence runs a river of hopes and dreams To find the essence of solitude, I must bridge its width So I wait, with patience, anticipating the quiet hush Its powerful roars come with solace, peace and true girth It drapes the busy walls like rich, velveteen brocade Tranquil, I find myself in its unfettered embrace I become a cocoon enwrapped in comfort and warmth Captivated, in the moment I savor the sweet taste In recline, my heart beats to its rhythmic chant And my breathing becomes slow, deeply sublime While I inhale the soothing fragrance of lavender oils The world is shut out and heart reaches its climb Peacefully drifting, light as leaf upon a river My soul rises to sing sacred songs of praise Enthralled in beauty of suspended animation And I breathe in the silence with solitude encased ~*~
Note: For Paula Swanson's "Breathe in Silence" Contest By : Audrey Carey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/6/2011 10:35:00 AM
Many congratulations Audrey on your most deserved win with this terrific poetry....:)
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Date: 1/5/2011 9:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Audrey in the "Breathe in the silence" contest by Paula Swanson. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/3/2011 1:14:00 PM
I really like the first line..The river of hopes and dreams...Congratulations on your win...Sara
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Date: 1/3/2011 12:15:00 PM
No wonder this poem was chosen among the best in the contest. You have pervasive and imaginative descriptiveness in this offering. My congrats to you.
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Date: 1/2/2011 9:26:00 PM
Audrey, congrats on your win! Thanks so much for your comments on my stuff. Love, Will
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Date: 1/2/2011 8:04:00 PM
Knew this one was a winner. Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 1/2/2011 8:37:00 AM
Ahh...this poem beats as light as a leaf upon a river...with beauty. Just wonderful poetry to start out my new year!! congratulations Audrey!!
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Date: 1/2/2011 5:56:00 AM
Congratulations Audrey on your well deserved big win!
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Date: 1/2/2011 5:05:00 AM
Bravo Audrey! Well deserved recognition and win honey! Lay
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Date: 1/2/2011 2:27:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved second place win in the contest of Paula, Audrey
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Date: 1/2/2011 12:46:00 AM
congrads in the contest. john
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Date: 1/1/2011 9:26:00 PM
Wow! his is so peaceful and captivating, Audrey. Love that line about the "beauty of suspended animation." Big congrats on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/1/2011 9:23:00 PM
Such a beauty Audrey! Congratulations on your awesome win, love Wilma
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Date: 1/1/2011 8:21:00 PM
A beautiful poem Audrey. You truly found "the essence of solitude) Congratulations on your big win. Love, joyce
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Date: 1/1/2011 8:19:00 PM
Im so thrilled with this poem..good one Audrey...its just lovely. Congrats. BG
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Date: 1/1/2011 8:08:00 PM
Congrats Audrey on your 2nd place win in the Silence contest with this incredible entry my friend.. enjoy with luv this first day of 2011 ...
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Date: 12/31/2010 4:14:00 PM
Silence can be one of the most peaceful times on earth. it helps you think, release negativity, etc.(: --light as a leaf upon a river--, great line & stanza. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 12/31/2010 1:09:00 PM
I enjoyed the read of your "Essence of Solitude" very much, Audrey! Good luck with this great write in Paula's contest!...Love, Gert
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Date: 12/31/2010 9:35:00 AM
Beautiful I could almost relax in your words. An awesome write . Good Luck in Paula's contest. HAVE A GREAT EVENING. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 12/30/2010 8:49:00 PM
well, gosh, could this be any prettier, Audrey?? I think the only way I could outdo this is to go in the total opposite direction and make silence really horrible, but I am sure Paula would not enjoy it. haha. I hope I have time to give this contest a try but have you seen all the contests going on right now? too many to keep up with! Good luck with this beauty. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 12/30/2010 8:15:00 PM
A most vivid and amazing work Audrey. Love the flow and rhythm.
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Date: 12/30/2010 7:11:00 PM
Great work you have penned!! Happy New year to you!! Hope all your dreams come true!!
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Date: 12/30/2010 6:56:00 PM
beautifully written. My sort of poem. Wonderfully descriptive, Audrey
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Date: 12/30/2010 6:49:00 PM
Lovely lilting lines Audrey for this wonderful theme on silence.. good luck in the contest.. luv the world is shut out and heart reached its climb.. don't we know the feeling luv...good luck as always.. with luv..
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Date: 12/30/2010 5:38:00 PM
an exquisite trip into a soothing meditation. You described it very nicely, Audrey. esp for a thing so difficult to describe in words. Well done! Glad you are feeling better. Thanks you for all your wonderful comments. I've been quite busy with work of late and haven't had much time for the soup. Nice to see yoiu on here!
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