The Errant Knight

Seeing through the wav’ring flame of light
your porc’lain skin your brazen eyes so fair,
the songs which stir the depth of frosty night
do not waylay the course of love’s despair.

For love of King, not I, thine heart’s declared.
Oh, I am damned by wanton deed bespoke
on Furies wings my cursed heart’s ensnared   
and in the fire we shall rise on smoke.

My love I’ll not rescind, nor Him provoke.
Beside your sleeping form our bed a pyre, 
the curtain's caught in candle flame once stoked, 
we’ll go to Holy Hell within the fire,

a martyred Queen, an errant Knight so blind
for Kings and common men are seldom kind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Gildersleeve Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 9:27 AM
Congratulation Debbie. A wonderful sonnet. Warm Smiles, Connie
Ryerson Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 9:16 AM
Another beauty, Cher...I read this first to myself and then again out loud (which is the true test) it was quite cool and it passed the 'Timmy-Test' with flying colors - Tim
Veetil Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 8:30 PM
beautiful poem penned Debbie, loved reading ....congrats..
A  Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 2:23 PM
a good sonnet*SKAT
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 10:12 AM
Congrats on your HM Oh cool lady xx
A   Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 9:08 PM
A beautiful win DG...congrsts...pd
Burch Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 8:39 PM
Why Miss Pitty...you evva do have a flaih for words! I do declaih I think I just mite blush [said Scarlet] lol congraats!! Luuv you bunches.
Haick Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 8:38 PM
Wow! Congratulations on a very fine win, Debbie! Luv, Annalise
Johnson Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 3:53 PM
he could not have helped to see the merit in this one. I love it. Congratulatilon. Love, Joyce
Brown Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 8:21 AM
Congratulations in the contest of Dr. Ram Mehta "The Spenserian Sonnet" Debbie. A well deserved winner. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
March 15, 2011 at 9:40 PM
Kudos Debbie for big win in Dr Ram's Spenserian contest with this creative piece. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
Mannan Avatar
March 15, 2011 at 8:27 PM
Loved it the first time and still do. Many warmest comgratulations for this win.
Richards Avatar
March 15, 2011 at 3:47 PM
Now...this is truly Shakesperean....the only one that speaks in the tongue of that era that I've read so far!! Congrats, Debbie!!
Devonshire Avatar
March 15, 2011 at 10:54 AM
Very interesting poem, Deb. Lots of great images. Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
March 15, 2011 at 8:31 AM
Congrats Debbie on your spectacular win in Dr. Ram's Sonnet contest with this fantastic entry luv.. enjoy another chart topping sweet success with luv..
Mehta Avatar
March 15, 2011 at 8:04 AM
Congratulations on the seventh place win in my contest, Debbie
Onclaud Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 11:12 PM
rennaisance glowing!! one word: whew!! :) SOUP MAIL !huggs, nette
George   Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 10:26 PM
A MASTERPEICE! Deb.
Rhinem Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 9:44 PM
S*M*I*L*E ~ "H*A*P*P*Y V*A*L*E*N*T*I*N*E*S D*A*Y M*Y D*E*A*R,,,B*E*A*U*T*I*F*U*L```D*E*B*R*A G*U*Z*Z*I¤¤¤'L*O*V*E,,,J*O*H*N!!!:))) ~
Mannan Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 8:19 PM
This reads like Elizabethean poetry. Takes you all the way back. Just beautiful.
Dufresne Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 6:40 PM
like I read it out of a classical poetry book, Debbie. nice work.
Johnson Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 5:29 PM
Great Sonnet. I love the style. Thank you for my 4th place in your contest. Love, Joyce
Haick Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 4:44 PM
I don't know much about the Spenserian Sonnet Form, Deb, so I can only say this, THIS POEM IS AWESOME!! Truly rocks!! I thoroughly enjoyed this and had to read it three times! Definitely one for my Favs. List, "Teacher"! Much love, Annalise
Richards Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 4:42 PM
You have outdone the Spenserion...and made it your own....a magical kingdom of knights and queens...and excellent, as always!!
Pettit Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 3:39 PM
This one I'm sure the Doctor will like for his contest. This is a fine example of a Spenserian sonnet.
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