The Errant Knight

Seeing through the wav’ring flame of light
your porc’lain skin your brazen eyes so fair,
the songs which stir the depth of frosty night
do not waylay the course of love’s despair.

For love of King, not I, thine heart’s declared.
Oh, I am damned by wanton deed bespoke
on Furies wings my cursed heart’s ensnared   
and in the fire we shall rise on smoke.

My love I’ll not rescind, nor Him provoke.
Beside your sleeping form our bed a pyre, 
the curtain's caught in candle flame once stoked, 
we’ll go to Holy Hell within the fire,

a martyred Queen, an errant Knight so blind
for Kings and common men are seldom kind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/8/2013 9:27:00 AM
Congratulation Debbie. A wonderful sonnet. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 2/8/2013 9:16:00 AM
Another beauty, Cher...I read this first to myself and then again out loud (which is the true test) it was quite cool and it passed the 'Timmy-Test' with flying colors - Tim
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Date: 2/7/2013 8:30:00 PM
beautiful poem penned Debbie, loved reading ....congrats..
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Date: 2/7/2013 2:23:00 PM
a good sonnet*SKAT
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Date: 2/7/2013 10:12:00 AM
Congrats on your HM Oh cool lady xx
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Date: 2/6/2013 9:08:00 PM
A beautiful win DG...congrsts...pd
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Date: 2/6/2013 8:39:00 PM
Why Miss Pitty...you evva do have a flaih for words! I do declaih I think I just mite blush [said Scarlet] lol congraats!! Luuv you bunches.
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Date: 2/6/2013 8:38:00 PM
Wow! Congratulations on a very fine win, Debbie! Luv, Annalise
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Date: 3/16/2011 3:53:00 PM
he could not have helped to see the merit in this one. I love it. Congratulatilon. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/16/2011 8:21:00 AM
Congratulations in the contest of Dr. Ram Mehta "The Spenserian Sonnet" Debbie. A well deserved winner. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/15/2011 9:40:00 PM
Kudos Debbie for big win in Dr Ram's Spenserian contest with this creative piece. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 3/15/2011 8:27:00 PM
Loved it the first time and still do. Many warmest comgratulations for this win.
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Date: 3/15/2011 3:47:00 PM
Now...this is truly Shakesperean....the only one that speaks in the tongue of that era that I've read so far!! Congrats, Debbie!!
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Date: 3/15/2011 10:54:00 AM
Very interesting poem, Deb. Lots of great images. Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/15/2011 8:31:00 AM
Congrats Debbie on your spectacular win in Dr. Ram's Sonnet contest with this fantastic entry luv.. enjoy another chart topping sweet success with luv..
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Date: 3/15/2011 8:04:00 AM
Congratulations on the seventh place win in my contest, Debbie
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Date: 2/14/2011 11:12:00 PM
rennaisance glowing!! one word: whew!! :) SOUP MAIL !huggs, nette
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Date: 2/14/2011 10:26:00 PM
A MASTERPEICE! Deb.
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Date: 2/14/2011 9:44:00 PM
S*M*I*L*E ~ "H*A*P*P*Y V*A*L*E*N*T*I*N*E*S D*A*Y M*Y D*E*A*R,,,B*E*A*U*T*I*F*U*L```D*E*B*R*A G*U*Z*Z*I¤¤¤'L*O*V*E,,,J*O*H*N!!!:))) ~
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Date: 2/14/2011 8:19:00 PM
This reads like Elizabethean poetry. Takes you all the way back. Just beautiful.
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Date: 2/14/2011 6:40:00 PM
like I read it out of a classical poetry book, Debbie. nice work.
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Date: 2/14/2011 5:29:00 PM
Great Sonnet. I love the style. Thank you for my 4th place in your contest. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/14/2011 4:44:00 PM
I don't know much about the Spenserian Sonnet Form, Deb, so I can only say this, THIS POEM IS AWESOME!! Truly rocks!! I thoroughly enjoyed this and had to read it three times! Definitely one for my Favs. List, "Teacher"! Much love, Annalise
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Date: 2/14/2011 4:42:00 PM
You have outdone the Spenserion...and made it your own....a magical kingdom of knights and queens...and excellent, as always!!
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Date: 2/14/2011 3:39:00 PM
This one I'm sure the Doctor will like for his contest. This is a fine example of a Spenserian sonnet.
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