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The End

Words were spoken vows broken. Wounded heart weeps at secrets it keeps. Ignorance is bliss betrayed by a kiss. Too late to mend This is the end.

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Don Johnson

Date: 10/30/2010 9:54:00 PM

great poem Francine ... Horse runs off ....is about moving on ... the trick, fooling yourself ...another lover is waiting...seek and find too late foreplay....

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/22/2010 2:54:00 PM

so sad... must be a chocolate kiss---He ate the last one, yep unforgivable!! LOL

James Peranteau

Date: 10/22/2010 8:50:00 AM

Now you are intitled to cut the pie dear poet ! Sometimes we hear the same lines, yet these are the line which bring us back to reality after riding our white horse, and spilling on slip the beauty of it all ! Great write ! Much love, james

James Fraser

Date: 10/22/2010 8:16:00 AM

True words Francine, cool couplet >> James :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/21/2010 7:36:00 AM

Ignorance is bliss but betrayed by a kiss --very thoughtful expression, Francine

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/21/2010 7:33:00 AM

Simply put and beautifully written Francine.. the steps to heart break and loss of luv.. enjoyed on my cloudy Thursday ...luv..

Suresh Iyer

Date: 10/21/2010 12:27:00 AM

too emotional

Mohammad Taha Effendi

Date: 10/21/2010 12:24:00 AM

I can relate to it Francis. Beautiful write. Taha

Charles Henderson

Date: 10/20/2010 9:49:00 PM

This sounds bad Francine, hope it is fictional. Charles

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/20/2010 8:35:00 PM

Ignorance isn't really bliss after all, is it, Francine? Once that bond is broken, it's hard to salvage a relationship but sometimes former lovers can become good friends. Take it from your birthday buddy; it's great when that happens. Hope you're not going through a breakup now. Wishing you peace and love, Carolyn