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The Empty Cradle

Twas' not a night of sleep but rather one of fumbled words with coiling dreams and never ending grief; She was my doll deprived of touch and breath devoid of arms and bosom bare; So lost was I in deep forfeited grace that down in single file to the City of insanity I went All spent and desolate to the empty cradle I did ask, can you hear her minuet ? can you feel her angel breath ? I should have known by your stone reply that you could not return the facsimile of her soft smile; And so in false pretense the moon just bore me in til' dawn all flushed with orange glow forgave the night and took me down without a fight.

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Date: 5/19/2018 9:49:00 PM
Well done, Pixie. Congrats on your silver medal win.
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Date: 5/20/2018 6:02:00 AM
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Date: 5/15/2018 8:17:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win. Well done.
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Date: 5/16/2018 1:03:00 PM
Thank you Susan for your comment, Have a wonderful day,
Date: 5/5/2018 1:00:00 PM
Oh my. This is a heartbreaking poem that touched me deeply. Well written. Can feel the angst behind the words.
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Date: 5/4/2018 9:22:00 PM
I could feel the agony of loss in your poetic words and excellent imagery, Pixie. Very well written!
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