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The Elusive Nymph

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Accidentally I stumbled on the hidden pool,
      I saw her there among the sedge, so lovely and cool,

"Come swim with me," she smiled in an angelic way.
      Euphorically my heart beat fast with radiant sway.

How fast I swam towards that heavenly vision,
      Only to see her vanish in a colourful prism.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/26/2023 5:54:00 AM

Sweet whimsy Victor. Enjoyed this one! hugs :)

Karen Jones

Date: 9/21/2023 10:24:00 AM

What a lovely dreamy poem!

Charles Messina

Date: 9/13/2023 3:21:00 AM

Maybe it wasn't a mirage at all. Perhaps it was she stopping by to say hello :)

I Am Anaya

Date: 9/10/2023 9:05:00 AM

Sailors were told to pay attention to detail and 'don't be distracted by Circe thoughts' :D It sounds delightful that the female divinity appeared. Hope she returns! An allegorical whimsy yarn, which begs to be continued!

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/10/2023 6:02:00 AM

Oh my, this was such a breathtaking and captivating read.. The way you created an angelic and magical imagery with subtly glowing flow.. Only to give it the twist of sombre depth in the end.. I absolutely love the way how artistically the ending lines have been woven "how fast I swam towards that heavenly vision, only to see her vanish in a colorful prism" There's so much vividness in this line, whilst being so delicately hued.. Such a brilliant write

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/9/2023 8:39:00 AM

This is so cute - whimsical - I enjoyed the imagery and the tease of this 'heavenly vision, only to see her vanish in a colourful prism' Beautiful poem Victor my friend. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/8/2023 6:28:00 PM

Dear Victor, I adore this poetic beauty, filled with lush dreamy imagery. Your artistic expression is elegant and enchanting, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 9/8/2023 5:15:00 PM

She was a teaser no doubt, all the fun of the chase and then she vanishes without trace. A good write Victor… Belle

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/8/2023 8:43:00 AM

Hypnotic! Bravo!

Tom Woody

Date: 9/8/2023 6:44:00 AM

Ahh, a nymph mirage. Hallucination? Reminds me a bit of the Will O The Wisp legend. In any case, great stuff Victor

Lisa Ricci

Date: 9/8/2023 3:45:00 AM

Good Afternoon Victor. Hi. This is most beautiful and very poetic. Truly. It flows with great expression voice and tone. Always are you amazing with your executions. Have a wonderful day filled with love peace beauty health and more. Love and Blessings always. (smile)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/8/2023 2:01:00 AM

A delightful capsule of romance left hanging, Victor:)

Speaks Volumes

Date: 9/8/2023 1:33:00 AM

Well written Victor, Sad that she disappeared, but nymphs are well known for appearing again when your least expect them. Keep your eyes open ! SV

Ministryofdreams Daisy Silk

Date: 9/7/2023 8:49:00 PM

Such a magical Couplet with this enchanted painting. What a beautifully expressed dreamscape vision that you have painted with words. The last line got my heart aching; “Only to see her vanish in a colourful prism” Beautiful.

Eve Roper

Date: 9/7/2023 12:16:00 PM

She escapes from you after she tempted you. Love the read.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 9/7/2023 10:53:00 AM

A charming short tale of a dreamlike vision! I enjoyed this a lot, Victor.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/7/2023 8:59:00 AM

short and sweet. i really like this, Victor

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/7/2023 8:51:00 AM

You paint an enchanting verse with your words Victor. Tom

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/7/2023 8:49:00 AM

That ending got me my friend. You very fine poetry always has that special splash to it. This to me is indeed superbly crafted poetry. I could see the scene so well and the ending a great artist's mind gave us was fantastic. To have a ravenous beauty and find that it was a mirage! A true gem and a fav for me. God bless you.

Ink Empress

Date: 9/7/2023 8:01:00 AM

Whoa, that ending, this is so moving and touching, how one sees something that isnt there, depicts the longing so very vividly. Especially “ how fast i swam towards that heavenly vision “ this is one of those poems that made me “ sigh” loved it. Very evocative

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/7/2023 6:20:00 AM

Your poem, crafted with eloquence and talent, Victor. It captivated the senses with its exquisite imagery and poignant words. It painted a vivid picture of love and longing, evoking a sense of enchantment and wonder.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/7/2023 5:59:00 AM

Wow!! I like this one, Victor. Kind of different from your usual works. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/7/2023 5:59:00 AM

"How fast I swam towards that heavenly vision, Only to see her vanish in a colourful prism." Ain't that the truth! All is illusion. True love, the only real. Blessings my friend. Inspiring write.