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The Elder

In the shadow of this tree, Judas mapped his misery, But saw no finger-post, save one: A beckoning oblivion. So up he climbed, with labored breath, To where he could devise his death. The twisted tree, by time distressed, Would ratify his wretchedness, And let him fall — his loss complete, The seamless sky his winding sheet.

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Date: 8/7/2017 10:06:00 PM
Judas has always been a problem for me in that I think he might have been a scape goat. Your poem has opened up my mind and shook out that conundrum.
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Date: 6/13/2017 5:49:00 PM
Another jewel! You are very talented!
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