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" EDITING " MY PHOTO, ©

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Another day starts, Another day of my life's editing I have to begin: New things to write, Other things to correct and Some old things to erase! Yesterday, The same things I did I thought that I had finished with editing But New events proved me wrong Thus Made me start all over again: My writing My correcting My erasing. Tomorrow, Another day will be born The same procedure I would have To follow, You see, my dear friends, Life is full of lessons: Some good Some bad Some painful Some pleasant. Thus Life is never boring For It is always in motion, Always in constant change And Myself have no choice but to keep up with her pace So As life dictates its terms, I have no choice But to obey Therefore I have to keep editing my life in perpetuity if I don't ish to fall behind! © Demetrios Trifiatis 25 November 2018

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Date: 11/25/2018 11:18:00 AM
We all travel on the journey of life , yes mistakes we make but we learn from them gaining wisdom. Tom.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/25/2018 4:40:00 PM
Yes, my friend, Tom. We all travel but not all of us learn! Thank you so much!
Date: 11/25/2018 8:37:00 AM
Boredom has no room in a Life in "motion"!.. A beautiful, knowledgeable soul strives to occupy every single chamber of their heart, mind and soul with Beauty, grace, Faith, Love and Light.. A beautiful soul keeps "editing".. "erasing".. learning from mistakes and growing in beauty, peace and Love.. that's You dear Demetrios the philosopher! A great profound poem that touches the soul and shakes the mind! A FAV. A great pleasure to read! My deepest regards.. stay blessed always.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/25/2018 4:39:00 PM
Ah, how wonderful to read your profound, analytic and uplifting comment! It is so good to find someone to really comment on the writing of someone else ! Thank you for your appreciation. God bless you for your kindness!
Date: 11/25/2018 8:07:00 AM
A lesson on life...a process of constant change for the better. You said it well, Demetrios.
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Date: 11/25/2018 4:34:00 PM
Thank you dearest, Vijay. So noble of you to visit and comment!

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