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The Edge

Standing on the edge should I just let go? Just leap and see where I will end up? Or should I just hang around wait for a better day until the clouds clear until my vision is no longer obscured What if I still can’t decide? Would that make me a coward? Scared to be me? The person I know I can be I don’t want to look in the mirror one day and not like what I see I want to look in the mirror and see the real me Head held high facing forward not dwelling on the past regretting the what if's of days gone by So watch me leap and maybe just maybe my wings will open up and do what they were meant to do all along… Fly, not because I forced them but because the timing was just right! 4th place *SWITCH CONTEST* Sponsored by: JOHN HECK

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Date: 12/4/2010 5:07:00 AM
SUPER WIN WILMA. ); BIG CONGRATS..
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Date: 12/3/2010 2:42:00 AM
Big congrats on your win, Wilma!:) Super poem;) Hugs, Emilia
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Date: 11/29/2010 11:45:00 PM
congrats on your placement wilma peace, kurt
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Date: 11/29/2010 4:54:00 AM
Congratulations Wilma on your win in John Heck's "Switch" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/28/2010 1:52:00 PM
My hearfelt congratulations on this excellent write to be a winner in this contest, Wilma
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Date: 11/28/2010 11:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in this fine contest..Sara
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Date: 11/28/2010 8:13:00 AM
This is so true, Wilma....spoken for those of us who fly because the timing was just right....keeping one's head held up out of pure courage and pride! Congratulations on your win!!
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Date: 11/28/2010 6:08:00 AM
Congrats on your win!!!! Im so happyy you placed well in this contest....Bravo!!! love Michael
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Date: 11/27/2010 8:48:00 PM
Now you are standing out above others, Wilma, overlooking the beautiful scenery spot of your life, very deep insight. Congratulations on your winning this contest, well deserved one. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 11/27/2010 8:38:00 PM
Wonderful to think the jump from pain could be a leap instead, congrats on winning:)
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Date: 11/27/2010 8:24:00 PM
Congrats Wilma on your big win in John's contest with this wonderful entry so very expressive and poignant my friend... enjoy another big victory tonight with luv..
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Date: 11/27/2010 7:28:00 PM
Many congratulations dear Wilma for this super win.
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Date: 11/19/2010 6:24:00 AM
I love this. Love it, love it. Go there again!
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Date: 11/7/2010 8:29:00 AM
You are already an ace flyer, Wilma! As for the wings, keep flapping and you'll stay on cloud nine forever. We all have choices to make in life and you purposely chose to be happy in yours! So proud to have you as a friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/6/2010 5:43:00 PM
Hi Wilma.Loved this.Takes courage to take that step.Because if you don't before you know it's too late.Mind you many people fail at something,not because they can't do it but because as you say the timing isn't right. Or it wasn't right for them after all,though at the time it's what they desired.another pitfall in life we can fall into.Im glad you followed your desire to write poetry or we would have missed out on your gift.Thanx for comments on my Love's Dream.That is my desire. Love June(S)
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Date: 11/6/2010 11:56:00 AM
So many have been close to the edge Wilma, and so many have fallen. Well written verse >> James :)
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Date: 11/6/2010 10:24:00 AM
Hello Wilma, I actually took the leap of faith with you! This is so well captured. I love it! As Always, Shar
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Date: 11/6/2010 10:07:00 AM
Super smiles as I read this! and can't help but be able to relate-- all in time dearie, all in their own time... & I know you'd soar with those beautiful wings & spirit of yours :) really enjoyed this inspiring poem, :) hugs -- nikko :)
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Date: 11/6/2010 6:51:00 AM
If this is for contest....Bravo!!!! my poet angel...Any yes I will be responding to email.. lovely as its poet...Love Michael
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