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For the 'The echo returns not' Poetry Contest of Unseeking Seeker

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The words that sometimes with my pen I write in hope that others - who on seeing them might echo me – instead seem like a rose which goes unseen and withers on its stem. Like homing pigeons I’ve loosed to the world, the words that I so strongly feel are true do not return! Oh, where is my reply? Why let them fly at all into the blue? My thoughts I cannot force on anyone, but it would feel so nice to hear the sound of dear beliefs – those similar to mine - reverberate like sweet notes all around. God hears my words, so I should not expect others’ respect for my sincerest thought though I might shout it from the mountain top, then realize the echo returns not.

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Date: 3/13/2025 10:57:00 PM
So much wisdom in this. I love your take on his contest- should be a winner! <3
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Date: 3/12/2025 6:56:00 PM
Andrea, nice sentiments for someone who might not get replies. At least we can read this and know what that would feel like...not very good to feel that way. Of course, there might be replies that agree with us. We have that a lot too. Perhaps that is what you are referring to. Smiles!
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Date: 3/12/2025 5:01:00 PM
Sometimes that is the way it feels that our words are not hurt and don't return in any form. Thanks for sharing this contest entry with us. It reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 3/11/2025 4:54:00 PM
Dear Andrea, Oh how wonderfully you speak deeply to the soul with such longing for connection, for our words to find a mirror in others. I loved your quiet vulnerability, the hope written in each line, is powerful. O' the quiet strength in persistence, even when the echoes don’t return. Beautifully written! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 3/11/2025 11:43:00 AM
Collaboration via comment is so lovely like a rose…the thorns only if they add light. Poem seems to ultimately speak of God, who hears, though many choose not to. Hugs
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Date: 3/11/2025 9:38:00 AM
You have approached the subject in a unique way. Our sincerest thoughts may sometimes get lost in wilderness. We don't even hear their echoes. Well penned. All the best, dear Andrea.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/11/2025 10:25:00 AM
thanks, Valsa. I could not think of a different kind of approach to take.
Date: 3/11/2025 9:25:00 AM
This is so human, i don't expect so much, it is more safe sometimes, thanks for the deep and touching poem yann
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/11/2025 10:25:00 AM
thanks, Yann
Date: 3/11/2025 2:21:00 AM
This is like a meditation that may go wherever it pleases the reader. I am very strict about my beliefs.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/11/2025 10:26:00 AM
Yes, I think it can hold different meanings for people. I too am strict in my beliefs and I am not popular for it.
Date: 3/10/2025 6:54:00 PM
Sorry I missed the deeper meaning. My beliefs do not align with a lot of the poets on this site either. So I too do not post poems concerning certain subjects.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/10/2025 11:16:00 PM
Thanks, Oliver. I am glad it can be taken different ways though.
Date: 3/10/2025 5:49:00 PM
Beautiful poem Andrea. You always write so well with both form and message. I think your words do reverberate and echo through Poetrysoup and among the other poets.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/10/2025 6:24:00 PM
thanks, so nice of you to say. My meaning is a bit deeper. i am discussing beliefs and mine do not align with at least half the people on this site: Topics I rarely hit on because of that.
Date: 3/10/2025 4:28:00 PM
Your words echo somewhere out there Andrea, Very nicely penned
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/10/2025 5:46:00 PM
For a few I imagine. thanks, Joseph.
Date: 3/10/2025 4:03:00 PM
Beautifully done, Andrea. I admire those who are able to write 'poetry that rhymes' and convey such beautiful messages. Thank you for this. The Psalmist says in Psalm 11:1 "In the Lord I put my trust; How can you say to my soul, “Flee as a bird to your mountain”? Thank you again and keep up with your beautiful writing. I see I have some catch-up reading to do. Have a blessed day, my friend. :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/10/2025 5:45:00 PM
thanks, you are right. It's not easy to write a serious message in rhyme. If i were better at free verse, I would use it instead. haha
Date: 3/10/2025 3:54:00 PM
Nice poem about a truth, seems the newer poets on this site reply only between themselves...good luck
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/10/2025 5:45:00 PM
Sadly, I only respond from my inbox page. I just don't have time otherwise.
Date: 3/10/2025 1:44:00 PM
What a lovely write you have here. "Good Luck" Have a fun day as you write away..........
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/10/2025 5:45:00 PM
thanks, Paula.

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