The Drunken Bummmm

FrUm thE NUMB TuM Of A BuM  RuM sPiL
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hE sAyZ RUnUuM kILLZ the LIvEr
BUut LoVe KiLLZ mY HeARt 
IvE CoNcluded ThAt thEIR Both
the ReasONZ I bEcAmE A BuM
FrUm ThE sTART

FrUm thE NUMB TuM Of A BuM  RuM  sPiL
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(BuRp) CaNt wAit tO BEEE rICh aGAIN 
AnD NoOo mAtteR hOW BiG hEr aSs is
I woOonT gEt mRried toO a GolD DIGGin
HarLeT AgAin NoO nOT AGaiN mY fRienD 
bEcominG 1 WiHT ThE EsSeNce oF HuMbLe
POveRty IZ tHe The BesT wAy To EvaDe tHe
DeViLs traps WiZe & HuMble Are ThOse WHo
SeTtle foR whAt YOu wOuld CaaaLL ScrAPs & 
KNowinG ONe DAy JESUS WILL COME B
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AnD WhEn He DoeS MY ONLY SIN wILL bE ConsumptioN Of rUM
sO yOU CAN LAuGH At at ummmmmmm 
oh yea laugh at us DruKeN BuMMMMmms
BuT iN HeaveN We wIll HaVe morE ThAn a CrumB and A bottlE of rUm

AND wHeN tHe LoRD DenieS YOU at the gate please dont Ask how COME

Because he wiLl say yOU were
 SelfisH,GREEDY,And called the 
 BuMS STInkyy and DuMMMMMM

And pluS aLL You gave Him WaS a CRUMMMM!!!
I SWEar you RicH Folks Are DuMMMMMMMMM!!!!

FrUm thE NUMB TuM Of A BuM  RuM sPiL
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Sweetheart Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 9:08 PM
congrats Elliott on a fantastic win with a wonderful title luv.. thankxx for all your terrific comments.. really enjoy your words luv..
Arowolo Avatar
June 15, 2012 at 1:15 PM
Awesome and wonderful piece,Elliot.You done it again with your unique write-the drunken style...You must be a Karate guy or kung fu fighter...Hahahaha!...Congratulations on your win,Pal
Brown Avatar
June 15, 2012 at 11:46 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s's "Outstanding Title" contest Elliott. Love, Carol
Rozario Avatar
June 15, 2012 at 12:24 AM
Big congrats on your win Elliott
Taylor Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 6:43 PM
Congrats, Elliott. Great job. Nice going. Ralph
The Drunken Poet Avatar
June 15, 2012 at 12:02 AM
THANK YOU!!!
A   Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 5:37 PM
ELLIOTT , a wonderful congratulations with your outstanding direct poem, attached with a strong title. Can't wait for you join another one of MY contest. Take care! :-) PD
The Drunken Poet Avatar
June 15, 2012 at 12:02 AM
THANK YOU!!!
Britt Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 10:21 PM
This was INCREDIBLE!! I like reading it out loud; makes me feel cool <3
The Drunken Poet Avatar
June 15, 2012 at 12:01 AM
THANK YOU!!!
Deeks Avatar
May 31, 2012 at 12:11 AM
Hello this is well written imaginative,,,opened my eyes and mind... thanks karen
The Drunken Poet Avatar
June 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU!!!
Dietrich Avatar
May 30, 2012 at 10:53 PM
hey, I LOVE this drunken pen write you did here and how you incorporated some rhyme in with it. VerY fun stuff to read. Thanks again for my win in your contest. It was most interesting!!
The Drunken Poet Avatar
May 30, 2012 at 11:23 PM
No problem dear!!!Your always welcomed.Thank you!!!
The Drunken Poet Avatar
May 30, 2012 at 5:32 PM
If your wondering,towards the end I spelled KARMA backwards..
The Drunken Poet Avatar
May 31, 2012 at 1:58 AM
I will call you asap, but my pone is cut,asap.Their has been a crisis!!!
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