The Drill

from early on life's pace is going gone then we begin to slow and become of old face while others take the baton and keep the social pace stan sand

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Constance La France

Date: 1/29/2019 8:10:00 AM

Stan, short and sweet, I like to let others have the socials, I like going out to socialize ~

Sand Blown
Date: 1/29/2019 1:25:00 PM

yes...let others have the social...i'll just show up : )

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 1/27/2019 3:58:00 PM

Such an eloquent verse on the fluctuating rhythms of life, I am getting to the point of relinquishing the baton-

Sand Blown
Date: 1/27/2019 8:23:00 PM

it seems we are surprisingly light without the load we carry

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/24/2019 3:55:00 PM

You are certainly correct, I used to think I had to have a social function every week, then every two weeks, not about once every other month satisfies me completely.

Sand Blown
Date: 1/24/2019 5:16:00 PM

enjoy retirement...it is a thing of the mind...stay aware...stay alight...and write