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I meander past a rippling stream, my hair blowing in the wild wind; was that my name being called, softly? Did it sigh in the tangled trees above, I twirl and swirl to only bird songs; my name is but an echo, fading. Mother where are you, mother? Wait, wait, I am coming, wait for me; but only silence sighs, whispering. I wake suddenly in my hospital bed, lost in a sea of pain drifting; gasping and struggling, still breathing. I was lost in a vivid dream, where I was searching and seeking; then, I find myself back in life, moaning. ____________________________________ July 22, 2012 Poetry/Verse/'The Dream Still Lingers' Copyright Protected, ID 12-1185-401-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written after a near death experience.

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Date: 1/25/2021 5:57:00 PM
You bring this to life in vivid imagery ~ what an awesome surreal experience. Glad it was featured in the 2020 PS Anthology, Constance ~
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Constance La France
Date: 1/26/2021 8:07:00 AM
Line, thank you so much for visiting my poem and commenting, appreciate _Constance
Date: 10/1/2019 3:01:00 PM
As traumatic as this sounds it looses its sting with its beautiful phrasing. Best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 10/1/2019 7:43:00 PM
Debra, it was a life changing experience that set me on a better path, thanks for visiting and commenting !

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