The Dream of a Lonely Orphan

She sat alone
behind a closed window,
secured by iron grids,
on the top floor 
of an ugly old black building
that some dared call 
an orphanage.
 
Once she had hope,
Once she had dreams
that some kindly couple 
might perceive,
wish her for themselves,
take her to a cosy house,
where food was savoury to taste.
 
She dreamt she would 
achieve normality,
attend a proper school,
read books and play
with happy children,
receive toys occasionally,
and live in harmony.
 
The dream remained a dream.
days turned forlorn.
All hope was lost.
She was too old now.
Couples wanted small children,
Unsuitable ones came for her
but were refused.
 
Little did she know
that soon she would
develop another dream, 
that someone would finally notice her,
and carry her off
on a romantic spree.
From the closed barred window
She looked at the moon.
Will she find happiness?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Anaya Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 5:09 PM
Such reality is harsh, and some would rather not know. Thank you for making these realities known, Victor, many needy, we must not ignore. It is so moving and masterly written in your special way. Hugs ~Anaya
Fowler Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 11:55 AM
Only you can master your dreams. Reality is harsh. Poignant write Victor.
Edmonds  Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 8:48 AM
I do hope any orphan finds the happiness they long for eventually. The same can be said for those living in an unhappy home. A very moving poem Victor, some day her prince will come bringing happiness from that moment on… Belle
Kendrick Avatar
January 30, 2023 at 12:14 PM
Ahh!! I can feel the pain in this one. I feel for the children who need homes be it temporary ones or permanent ones. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
George Avatar
January 28, 2023 at 12:47 AM
This is so touching, dear Victor ! She represents everyone orphaned in one way or another. She hopes thar someone would come to rescue her. May her dreams come true. As long as there is hope, her life wouldn't be in utter darkness
Rose  Avatar
January 26, 2023 at 5:02 AM
Yes I think she will in the end God lights her path, through the light of the moon, lovely sentiments dear Victor
Messina Avatar
January 26, 2023 at 3:45 AM
Wow, this is sad. The saddest thing about it, is that it is probably true and happened more times than we think. Very touching write.
Legros Kelley Avatar
January 26, 2023 at 1:39 AM
Oh, this is so sad. There are many children waiting, it is heartbreaking. I pray those not adopted find their forever families one day, and especially solace in our heavenly Father who is a Father to the fatherless. By the way, thank you for writing this poem. Maybe it is just what someone somewhere needs to hear because maybe there is a child somewhere waiting for them. God bless you Victor, this is beautiful.
Dietrich Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 1:40 PM
so wistful and sad. Very nice, Victor.
Roper Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 9:52 AM
heartfelt verse about children left without a family.
Buehler Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 9:34 AM
So sad, Victor, but there is always hope, as long as there is love. An intense and moving story.
Pandit Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 7:38 AM
Profound write, Victor. Lonely orphans too have a dream. May be some day she will...
Seeker Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 7:17 AM
Powerful! One of your best writes, Victor
Lawrence Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 7:08 AM
You paint such a vivid picture with words dear Victor . Just beautiful in its sadness and hope all rolled into one . Your poems draw me in and capture me allowing me to listen and feel the words you have penned . Hugs to you , Susan :)
Poet Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 6:43 AM
A remarkable message that you've written with such care and deliberation in your poem, Victor. All along there is this pervading sense of sadness. Well-written and compassionate to the point where it touches the reader's soul.
DiMino Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 4:43 AM
Hi Victor; beautiful message. Sensitively written, truly touching the heart of this reader. LOVE is our Savior. For sure! Blessings my friend.
Andresen Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 2:14 AM
- Oh, I can see that sad face ... that has lost all hope ... a heartbreaking poem, Victor - hugs
Volumes Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 2:06 AM
So Sad, but beautifully written Victor. Sad because it really happens, and you have a way of making it seem so real.
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