The Dream

That night I had slept peacefully,
no repeating of the nightmare of a few nights before.
In my dream I had heard a voice.
The voice was loud and clear.
“Clifford Olson is dead.”
There was no repetition, no explanation,
only my son’s name and the stark pronouncement.
I fought out of the terror, to wakefulness.
The realization that I had been dreaming
slowed my racing heart but
did not dim the horror.
Throughout that day and a few days to follow, 
the voice followed, repeating the phrase,
over and over.

I had spoken to my son.
He was fine.
The voice still rang in my ears.

That night I had slept peacefully.
Then a voice again.
This time it was soft, sweet and sorrowful,
my daughter’s voice.

“Mama, Mama wake up.” 



By:  Joyce Johnson  Won first place

For Constance~ A Rambling Poet contest, "Create Your Own Form, Maybe?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/7/2010 9:01:00 AM
Congratulations Joyce on your excellent poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/5/2010 2:25:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your featured poem this week on the Soup my friend.. a great one to share with us all today with luv..
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Date: 12/4/2010 4:46:00 PM
congratulations Joyce on your first place win here.
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Date: 11/23/2010 2:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in this fine contest..Sad, Sara
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Date: 11/15/2010 8:34:00 PM
wow, a very eerie and powerful write from you, Joyce. Was this sad tale based on fact? Congrats for your top place! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/15/2010 10:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st Place win Joyce in Constance's contest "Create Your Own Form, Maybe?". Love, Carol
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Date: 11/15/2010 3:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your EXCELLENT VICTORY MRS JOY...LOVE, Lightening Ink.
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Date: 11/14/2010 11:39:00 PM
Joyce... vow for notching 1st place in the contest. congrats my friend.... Luv/Best wishes ...........Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 11/14/2010 9:08:00 PM
Joyce this is the most touching poem I have ever read. Many congratulations for this well deserved win.
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Date: 11/14/2010 10:03:00 AM
You will never lose your memories, Joyce. People say losing a child is the most painful of all experiences. My heart goes out to you. Thanks for you kind words on Mark Twain. His humor always gave me smiles. Blessings and love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/14/2010 8:36:00 AM
I just read your other poem about your son, Joyce, so I'm sure it was painful to write this. Congratulations on taking the top spot in Constance's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/14/2010 8:15:00 AM
What a haunting, and emotional personal story, Joyce. Written with such emotion. Well done and well deserving this 1st place honor. Love Carrie
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Date: 11/14/2010 7:28:00 AM
Congrats Joyce on your first place win with this wonderful entry so wonderfully written .. a well deserved first place my friend..enjoy with luv this happy Sunday...
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Date: 11/14/2010 4:13:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Joyce
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Date: 11/13/2010 11:51:00 PM
Congratulations Joyce on first place in my contest with this overwhelming dramatic poem, it left me breathless, please send me your address by soup mail, so I may send your Certificate Of Achievement in poetry~~ Love Constance
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Date: 11/9/2010 8:29:00 AM
enjoyed...yet sad too...
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Date: 11/8/2010 12:32:00 PM
sparkling element of suspense,joyce... wonderfully scribed.. good luck in the contest! warmest, nette
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