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The Dream

I laid there in bed I found myself being called by someone. I thought for a moment, am I dreaming? The voice was clear but I felt as though I was in a deep state of sleep. You know like experiencing a dream state and everything seemed so real. I wasn't sure if I was asleep or awake. I felt a strong force pulling me. I wanted to wake up from this dream that was becoming a nightmare. I saw darkness around me, and I was smelling a sulfur odor. This dream felt so real, as if I was really there. Those are the worst dreams the one's that make you feel like it is really happening and you wake up, and you are so happy you're out of that dream. In my dream I saw my dad who had died five years ago. It was so nice to see him, it brought me great joy. I hugged him and we shared a special moment playing catch in the back yard. I would pitch and he would be the Catcher. He said, " Tommy you can throw faster than that." That would motivate me, and my next ball I threw harder. I loved playing catch with my dad. " He said Tommy I have to go son, I have an important appointment, I will see you later." I said." Ok dad, later." In my dream I turned around and saw my Grandfather. He said. " Where is your father going?" I said, " I don't know Grandpa he said he had an important appointment." Grandpa replied, " What could be more important than playing ball with your son?" I agreed with Grandpa but then it hit me. Grandpa had died ten years ago! I then saw my mom telling my dad and Grandpa to go to church with her and Grandma. My father responded. "We are going fishing, and Tommy is going with us." I could see the disappointment in my Mother and Grandmas faces. She said to Grandpa and Dad, "Church is more important than fishing, and you're setting a bad example for Tommy." His response to mom was, " So be it." We left and went fishing and I could sense a disdain for God in my father. He always had a bottle, and Grandpa and him would drink while they fished. I started seeing the different stages of my life, watching my parents fight over his drinking, being raised in a dysfunctional home. My mother didn't believe in divorce, and I think that is what held the marriage together by a thread. In this dream I saw myself as a teenager escaping into taking drugs to deal with my parents constant fighting. I blamed God for everything especially not stopping my parents from fighting. I saw my mother and Grandma begging me to go to church. I would rather be with my friends partying and having sex with my girlfriend. In this dream I was shown the stages of my life to adulthood and all the sins I committed. I heard my father calling me and saw Grandpa with him. I headed toward them. As I did, their faces were changing into a hideous looking creature! It was laughing at me. They both grabbed me, pulling me down. I'm feeling heat, I can barely breathe, I am hearing Painful screams. Like people being tortured. I realize these are demons not grandpa and my father, I was tricked by them to lure me in. I am being pulled down. It is getting hotter. I cried out for help!!!!!! A voice told me "It is too late Tommy!" All of a sudden I see my mom and Grandma repeatedly through the years asking and begging for me to go to church and accept Christ into my heart. I made the choice not too! I knew where I was heading and I begged for mercy. "Oh my God, What have I done?" "This is not a Dream , I realized, I am Dead and heading to Hell!" For those that do not believe in hell please Go to YouTube when in Youtube type in Scariest Hell Testimony Ever 2025. This man died and went to Hell and he was given a second chance at life and he describes in detail what he experienced. If after watching this you feel that you don't need Christ There is nothing anyone can say or do to convince you... Accept if you go there and you get another chance like this man... Sadly there will be many like Tommy that had the opportunity to accept Christ and repent of their sins and did not. Christ loves you and he leaves the Choice to you. He won't force you to accept him. Every second in your life is crucial for you. You do not know the day or hour you will perish. I pray this sends a message to those that aren't saved. God is real, and Heaven and Hell are real. Don't be like Tommy and make the wrong Choice every second counts. Thank you for reading and I am praying for all to come to Jesus saving Grace and be welcomed into Heaven...

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Date: 3/25/2025 10:43:00 AM
What a powerful piece of writing God has saved my butt more times than I can count. I believe
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Date: 2/26/2025 3:41:00 PM
This was very interesting, Michael. But I like to think hell is going to be inhabited by truly evil people. I too saw programs on near death experiences related to hell. The amazing was that those people had the brains to call out to Jesus for him to save them. He reached down and pulled them out from hell one had been an atheist and the other a druggie. We just have to believe in God. Even in cultures that are not Christian. I think God will save those with good hearts
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/18/2025 10:26:00 PM
Do you never ask yourself if maybe you could be a little wrong? Maybe some things got lost in translation? What of those whose spiritual experiences are just as real to them as yours are to you,? There are so many strange things in the world right now. I am preparing to watch a video my son just sent me about a guy who is visited by angels. Cured of his fatal disease, he now heals people. His name is Bledso, , something like that. I just can't accept that things are all so black and white. Easter of 2026 is supposed to be a time of something coming. I will let you know what I learn about this guy. Remember you told me you saw aliens. This guy's alien is an angel called Lady.
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Michael Tor
Date: 2/27/2025 5:31:00 PM
He also wrote about end times prophecy. I hope you are doing well. Remember I am just the messenger and I wish everyone to be saved and go to heaven. God gives us the choice he can't make the choice up for us. That is why it is so important to be saved and have a loving relationship with your other father Jesus Christ. He loves you more than you can ever imagine and wishes no one to perish. Hugs to you and God's grace. I hope your husband Joe is doing well with his back...
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Michael Tor
Date: 2/27/2025 5:26:00 PM
Hi Andrea thank you for your kind words. Being a good person is a great thing but a good person that is not saved will sadly not see the kingdom of heaven. According to the Bible you must believe Jesus died and rose again and died for your sins, we must repent of our sins, love one another and keep Gods commandments and repent when sinning. Nice people that are saved will get rewards or as the Bible says crowns in heaven. Not all Gods are the same. Buddha for example is not Christ. There is only one God, and that is Jesus Christ of Nazareth. In my personal opinion you can get great information from Dr Michael Rydelnick of the Moody Bible institute. Dr John McArthur on YouTube, also I really recommend Hal Lindsey he wrote a best selling book The Late Great Planet Earth on the coming events such as the rapture of the church.
Date: 2/23/2025 9:51:00 AM
Greetings, dear Michael. Just wow, amazing! Your outstanding poetry explores life, death, and an individual named Tommy's spiritual journey. It explores the conflict between reality and dreams, the role of family relations, and the significance of faith and salvation. The subject also explores themes of loss and regret, highlighting the implications of life choices. Your word choice in the poem is simple yet vivid, skillfully communicating feelings and imagery. The phrases "strong force pulling me," "darkness around me," and "sulfur odor" evoke a visceral sensation of dread and disorientation. Dialogue, particularly with family members, provides a personal touch and strengthens the emotional bond.
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Michael Tor
Date: 2/26/2025 10:30:00 AM
Lasaad thank you Sir your comments are as great as your poetry. I really enjoy reading the in-depth detail of each of your words. They mean a lot and I am so thankful of your valued input. God bless you my friend and again thank you...
Date: 2/18/2025 1:15:00 AM
Hi Michael a sincere wonderful write, should for some be scary. Do we not all gossip, agreeing with colleagues that something is thought to be right, when we should stand up for that person they are gossiping about. I see you are very true in your comment replies, others merely prefer to be popular and agree with the wrong majority. I am like you for I still believe in the old testament and am GOD FEARING. HOWEVER I DO LOVE CHRIST BUT ASK GOD FOR FORGIVENESS Hugs and blessings jennifer.
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Michael Tor
Date: 2/23/2025 8:57:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer so much your words touched me. Hugs.
Date: 2/9/2025 3:31:00 AM
Michael, I understand and greatly appreciate the sincerity of your desire to see everyone getting into the fold of God's love. Your narration is so powerful that it reads like a beautiful story. When we discard the teachings of God and walk away from His path, unrest settles in our lives. The three dispositions needed for our soul is to believe, to hope and to love, as St. Augustine affirms. In times of darkness let us turn to God. Very inspirational, dear Michael.
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Michael Tor
Date: 2/9/2025 11:54:00 PM
Thank you Valsa, for your kind words. The love of Christ is there for anyone who chooses to believe in him, accept him in their heart, trust that he died for their sins and he took the punishment for them, and ask for forgiveness and read his inspiring word, following his commandments and loving one another as you would yourself and your neighbor. Sadly many do not want to give up their sin and do not make the commitment to Jesus and in return sadly they forfeit salvation and heaven. We must pray for the lost, and reach them with love and patience and understanding. God bless you Dear Valsa...
Date: 2/8/2025 7:55:00 PM
Wow! A very scary dream could become a real nightmare!
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Michael Tor
Date: 2/9/2025 11:49:00 PM
Yes Kim it can especially if you die and realize there is no turning back and you realize you can't change where you are at. It is Horrifying to say the least. that is why I try and reach others for Christ to avoid this Horrific place before it is too late, like for Tommy. Thanks for your support Kim.
Date: 2/8/2025 5:50:00 PM
What a powerful dream, filled with meaning, Michael.
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Michael Tor
Date: 2/9/2025 11:46:00 PM
Thank you David. It is a warning for people to consider trusting in Christ for salvation and avoiding a Horrible place named Hell. times are getting worse in this world and I sincerely believe that Jesus return is close. My way of helping others realize the gravity of not having faith in Christ and the ultimate result of it. I would hate to see anyone go to that terrible place... Thanks for your comment David...
Date: 2/7/2025 6:59:00 PM
Mchael! An intense look into your life and soul. I have had a great life, but a lot of it I would never share. As for alcohol, abuse that is a real problem that I am not afraid to talk about. I am seeing how it affects people’s lives and has nothing to do with choice. Alcoholism is defined as a physical and a mental disease by the American medical Association. I do know the rest of the world condems these Millions get sober every day and stay sober.. good you found God. Pangie Awesome right.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/8/2025 6:56:00 AM
Wanted to add, most all heard about AA, but my hearrt tells me they’d rather laugh at someone who’s drunk. And let’s face it with all the people here there hasss to be alcoholics here,These people need our understanding. They affect their children. But there is Alateen, AA, andAdult Children of Alcoholics! Most people don’t know that. Pangie
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Michael Tor
Date: 2/8/2025 12:24:00 AM
Hi Pangie. Thank you for sharing such personal information. So glad you are doing better. I understand Pangie I think we all have some skeletons in our closet. We all struggle with one form of sin that sometimes takes over and without God's interference we fall victim to it. So glad to hear from you. I've missed you. Hugs...
Date: 2/7/2025 2:29:00 AM
This is a powerful message. Even at death, one can escape eternal punishment. Those who end in hell can only blame themselves. Great thoughts.
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Michael Tor
Date: 2/7/2025 2:53:00 AM
This world is deteriorating day by day. It is a mess. Man by his choices are destroying it, through wars, civil unrest, fires. politics, hate, anger, everything Jesus was against. I sincerely think we are in the Last days of time. The rapture will someday happen, no one knows the time but many followers of Christ believe it will be soon. They do not know the exact day but the last sign is when the Temple is built and they are talking about doing that now. There is a great book out there by an author named Hal Lindsey called The Late Great Planet Earth. I encourage all to read it. What he wrote in 1970 has been happening exactly as he has said based on his biblical research. Victor thank you for your much appreciated comments. Please pray for those on the fence about believing in Christ, thank you and may the good Lord Bless you...
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Michael Tor
Date: 2/7/2025 2:43:00 AM
He wrote those words to protect us by following them. We are rebellious by nature and some of us do what we feel regardless of who we hurt, or disobey. We are all sinners but we are allowed to sincerely repent and change our ways, and live for God and love one another he commands us to do so. I pray for all to know and abide in Gods word. You can only do that by believing in him, repenting o your sins, Knowing he died for yo so you wouldn't have to go to hell. He took the punishment for us by being tortured and crucified and dying. That is how much he loves us. I encourage everyone to read The King James Version of the Bible and get to know Jesus and his father and Holy Spirit your life will change.
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Michael Tor
Date: 2/7/2025 2:37:00 AM
Thank you Victor. Victor I don't wish my worst enemy to go to Hell. Hell is forever, it is a constant torment of pain and suffering, isolation, torture forever. It is real and I do everything I can to help others realize this. God has rules it is his world, he created us , we are his. His word was written down inspired by God.
Date: 2/6/2025 6:00:00 AM
- The Bible does not say that unbelievers are tormented forever, either in a place of fiery torture or a place of dark isolation from God, Michael - (Hell) - The Apostle Paul wrote: "For the wages of sin is death, but the gift of God is eternal life in Christ Jesus our Lord." - hugs
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Michael Tor
Date: 2/6/2025 7:54:00 PM
John 3:36 He that believeth on the Son has everlasting life: and he that believeth not the son shall not see life; but the wrath of God abideth on him. Thank you Anne-Lise for stopping by God bless you...
Date: 2/5/2025 1:40:00 AM
Powerfully written. I am now a Christian but it took many years and trials. I think of the real life I could have had had I accepted Him earlier. But the joy isknowing my sins are forgiven and we can be with Him in eternity.
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Michael Tor
Date: 2/5/2025 7:43:00 PM
Oliver your words touched me. I am so glad you found the truth and accepted Jesus into your heart and changed in his protective direction. I am with you on that, I too wished I had followed his teachings and word when I was younger it took years and an experience to bring me to where I am today. As a researcher in many ways I know he is real and it is so important that we are saved. Time is running out I believe and the rapture is near I sense in seeing how corrupt and evil this world is... He is our only hope, no politicians to put our faith in just him. Oliver thank you so much for your feedback. God continue blessing you and your loved one's. Again thank you.
Date: 2/5/2025 1:32:00 AM
Hi Michael that's one eye opening narrative with a powerful message, hopefully my belief in our lord will keep me from hell's door.
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Michael Tor
Date: 2/5/2025 7:59:00 PM
John I wrote this to share with my brothers and sisters that time is of the essence and every second wasted could cause a terrible outcome for them. Getting right with Christ is the most important thing anyone can do to insure eternity in Heaven. God talked more about Hell than anything else. We can not get into Heaven with out him. The risk is not worth it to not being saved would you gamble your salvation on a coin toss. It is a fifty percent chance its real or its not. Is your salvation worth risking over fifty percent? No way would anyone with a right mind gamble like that. Be a hundred percent sure and accept him. Thank you John for stopping by God bless you my friend...

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