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I laid there in bed I found myself being called by someone. I thought for a moment, am I dreaming? The voice was clear but I felt as though I was in a deep state of sleep. You know like experiencing a dream state and everything seemed so real. I wasn't sure if I was asleep or awake. I felt a strong force pulling me. I wanted to wake up from this dream that was becoming a nightmare. I saw darkness around me, and I was smelling a sulfur odor. This dream felt so real, as if I was really there. Those are the worst dreams the one's that make you feel like it is really happening and you wake up, and you are so happy you're out of that dream. In my dream I saw my dad who had died five years ago. It was so nice to see him, it brought me great joy. I hugged him and we shared a special moment playing catch in the back yard. I would pitch and he would be the Catcher. He said, " Tommy you can throw faster than that." That would motivate me, and my next ball I threw harder. I loved playing catch with my dad. " He said Tommy I have to go son, I have an important appointment, I will see you later." I said." Ok dad, later." In my dream I turned around and saw my Grandfather. He said. " Where is your father going?" I said, " I don't know Grandpa he said he had an important appointment." Grandpa replied, " What could be more important than playing ball with your son?" I agreed with Grandpa but then it hit me. Grandpa had died ten years ago! I then saw my mom telling my dad and Grandpa to go to church with her and Grandma. My father responded. "We are going fishing, and Tommy is going with us." I could see the disappointment in my Mother and Grandmas faces. She said to Grandpa and Dad, "Church is more important than fishing, and you're setting a bad example for Tommy." His response to mom was, " So be it." We left and went fishing and I could sense a disdain for God in my father. He always had a bottle, and Grandpa and him would drink while they fished. I started seeing the different stages of my life, watching my parents fight over his drinking, being raised in a dysfunctional home. My mother didn't believe in divorce, and I think that is what held the marriage together by a thread. In this dream I saw myself as a teenager escaping into taking drugs to deal with my parents constant fighting. I blamed God for everything especially not stopping my parents from fighting. I saw my mother and Grandma begging me to go to church. I would rather be with my friends partying and having sex with my girlfriend. In this dream I was shown the stages of my life to adulthood and all the sins I committed. I heard my father calling me and saw Grandpa with him. I headed toward them. As I did, their faces were changing into a hideous looking creature! It was laughing at me. They both grabbed me, pulling me down. I'm feeling heat, I can barely breathe, I am hearing Painful screams. Like people being tortured. I realize these are demons not grandpa and my father, I was tricked by them to lure me in. I am being pulled down. It is getting hotter. I cried out for help!!!!!! A voice told me "It is too late Tommy!" All of a sudden I see my mom and Grandma repeatedly through the years asking and begging for me to go to church and accept Christ into my heart. I made the choice not too! I knew where I was heading and I begged for mercy. "Oh my God, What have I done?" "This is not a Dream , I realized, I am Dead and heading to Hell!" For those that do not believe in hell please Go to YouTube when in Youtube type in Scariest Hell Testimony Ever 2025. This man died and went to Hell and he was given a second chance at life and he describes in detail what he experienced. If after watching this you feel that you don't need Christ There is nothing anyone can say or do to convince you... Accept if you go there and you get another chance like this man... Sadly there will be many like Tommy that had the opportunity to accept Christ and repent of their sins and did not. Christ loves you and he leaves the Choice to you. He won't force you to accept him. Every second in your life is crucial for you. You do not know the day or hour you will perish. I pray this sends a message to those that aren't saved. God is real, and Heaven and Hell are real. Don't be like Tommy and make the wrong Choice every second counts. Thank you for reading and I am praying for all to come to Jesus saving Grace and be welcomed into Heaven...
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