The Do-Over Perfectionist: OCD

If her prayers were not perfect, Aunt Jen
would repeat them again and again.
Christmas cravings on hold
and our food growing cold,
we were dying to get to “Amen.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Miller Avatar
January 30, 2026 at 3:43 AM
So, so funny, congratulations
Callus Avatar
January 14, 2026 at 12:48 AM
Excellent, both content and flow, Andrea. A very much deserved top placement...congratulations! // paul
Dietrich Avatar
January 14, 2026 at 10:17 AM
Thanks, Paul
Guptar Avatar
January 13, 2026 at 11:27 AM
Congratulations, dear poetess, on your top trophy win in this contest with a perfectionist poem. It would seem you have inherited this trait from your Aunt Jen in the field of poetry. So imaginative and crative.
Dietrich Avatar
January 14, 2026 at 10:18 AM
Jen was a made up character but I appreciate this remark
Jones Avatar
January 13, 2026 at 1:20 AM
lol! Congratulations on your top win!
Richards Avatar
January 13, 2026 at 12:13 AM
You had me scratching my head with the rhyme "again" - researching it, I found that in certain British dialect it is pronounced "uh-GEN" (rhyming with "men" = "Jen"). :-)
Dietrich Avatar
January 13, 2026 at 12:36 PM
Haha! I am from Iowa. They named this the state of standard American English! But one unusual thing is pronouncing Wash as Wosh. I stopped doing that one after I moved west!
Richards Avatar
January 13, 2026 at 2:11 AM
Yes, we speak "proper" English ... lol
Dietrich Avatar
January 13, 2026 at 1:01 AM
Wow. Thanks for that win. Most Americans I know say again like a rhyme with Jen! For me it would be weird to say it like gain? Is it that way in south Africa?
Richards Avatar
January 7, 2026 at 12:04 PM
It's "OCD", dear :)
Dietrich Avatar
January 9, 2026 at 9:51 PM
Oops. Thanks!
Peck Avatar
January 2, 2026 at 7:37 PM
Funny! I can picture your Aunt Jen perfectly :)
Dietrich Avatar
January 14, 2026 at 10:19 AM
I made her up. Haha. But I do have a sister named Jenny
Anaya Avatar
December 30, 2025 at 11:19 AM
I can imagine it, so vivid. Great limerick, gave me laughs. Hope yours was a good one!
Dietrich Avatar
January 14, 2026 at 10:19 AM
Thanks so much
May Avatar
December 27, 2025 at 3:20 PM
waiting for the Amen to dig in, I enjoyed your Limerick Andrea
Kendrick Avatar
December 27, 2025 at 2:07 PM
That would be a very bad illness on everyone in that situation. I enjoyed reading this one today. I got a chuckle out of it. Thank you for sharing. Sara K
Canerdy Avatar
December 26, 2025 at 4:47 PM
GREAT limerick, Andrea! Yes, at big family meals~~when everybody's starving~~ it's best to ask someone you know will pray a short prayer! Janice
Dietrich Avatar
December 27, 2025 at 1:14 PM
This is made up. It was hard for me to think of something!
Maverick Avatar
December 26, 2025 at 1:41 PM
Stuff that bird..Er turkey..i mean i hope You got good portions, and the knife Cut clean.? Do you have baked potatoes? Not the jacket though kind.' Then get out for a walk, from house Confines.? Isn't normal great when you Or i consider..The antics of some no Doubt listing...Yet for now..Still powerfull Figures.)
Dietrich Avatar
December 27, 2025 at 1:13 PM
So why do potatoes in your country have jackets? Are they cold over there?
Goldsmith Avatar
December 26, 2025 at 11:42 AM
I enjoyed reading your Fun write. Thanks for the laugh... A Very Blessed/Happy New Year 2026 writing away...................
Dietrich Avatar
December 27, 2025 at 1:14 PM
Thanks, Paula
Onclaud Avatar
December 26, 2025 at 5:23 AM
lolz, exactly what perfectionist to a fault means...wishing you the graces of love and joy this season brings...merry christmas, andie!
Dietrich Avatar
December 27, 2025 at 1:14 PM
Thanks, sweetie
Cunningham Avatar
December 26, 2025 at 12:50 AM
Nothing beats a bit of cold turkey lol. Hope yours wasn't cold. Tom
Dietrich Avatar
December 27, 2025 at 1:15 PM
I don't eat that. I am not a fan of poultry. Just red meat for this girl!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 25, 2025 at 7:43 PM
Funny limerick!
Dietrich Avatar
December 27, 2025 at 1:16 PM
Thanks, Kim
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