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The Doc's Order REMOVED TO VIEWERS DISCRETION UNDERCONSTRUNCTION By: P.D.

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Harry Horsman

Date: 1/26/2022 1:44:00 AM

Wow took me half hour to find a poem, i had not commented on, Have you removed a poem? or is there major surgery going on here?..I thank you LInda, for these occasional visit which makes my day, bloody hell, you a bright light that comes into my dark and dreary days. Like the brightest of star you shine way beyond your absentees from this place. May the force be with you lass where ever you are..Miss you ever so much..Harry

Robert Nehls

Date: 7/19/2014 5:10:00 AM

Wow, Linda. This one is so sensuous. I wonder if doctors can feel those emotions, Seems like it would be hard not to. Very expressive and visual, my friend. Loved it.... Robert.

Robin Davis

Date: 11/27/2013 4:03:00 PM

Linda This is one hot and intense write. You made me blush with some of the lines. The description and imagery you used puts the reader right there with you. Nice job Thanks for the Thanksgiving wishes and love. Right back at you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/4/2013 12:02:00 AM

Came here to tell you about Star Wars. I have enjoyed those movies but maybe I am drawn a wee bit more to Star trek and only the funny Shatner guy resonated with me for a poem. Sorry I did not choose Star Wars . are we able to enter both contests? It seemed like we couldn't!

Richard D Seal

Date: 7/25/2013 7:17:00 PM

Mmmm, I missed my calling, I should have been a doctor with patients like you lol. How are you doing my Sweet Dark Friend? Take care, Richard

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 6/15/2012 9:31:00 PM

NOW TELL ME WHAT CAN I SAY SMH...UTTERLY POWERFUL !!!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 10/24/2010 6:53:00 AM

Email for you love....

Vrushani Thaker

Date: 7/20/2010 8:13:00 AM

Very true!!!!!! Good one!!!!! Thanks for comments!!!!!!!! But i would like to tell you that i am a girl and not a boy...I am a girl of 17... I am telling this to you as i read your comment!!!!! Vrushani!!!

Anthony Beesley

Date: 7/13/2010 10:05:00 AM

i enjoyed it. it was kind of psychosexual and neurotic.being a macho charismatic ladies man love king machine i don't like some josef mangela doctor with his cold and clammy hands all over my most prized possession.however what i fantasize about and what i do are often not one in the same

Samir Georges

Date: 7/12/2010 11:03:00 AM

so powerful, and every week you are reminded of your ex-husband, the memories of passion, such cruel yet welcome dalliances into the past. I must also say how much I appreciate your comments on my work, I plan to read much more of everyone's writing here once I'm back from vacation, such beautiful words and worlds to explore on the soup!

James Fraser

Date: 7/4/2010 2:06:00 PM

PD, so different a piece, but oh so good. Thank you for your always kind comments. Have a great 4th >> James

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2010 9:48:00 PM

PD you got some really good comments with this one! Did NIkko ask if it was for her contest becuase this was all a dream? So why that prescription then? hahaha. Some of the commenters are showing their secret fantasies here too. My only problem with this poem, you called it a sonnet. WHAT???? and hey, where is your fantasy creature for that one contest? Are you using that Lady Death person for your mythical beast?? Luv, Andrea

Kurt Kohls

Date: 6/26/2010 12:52:00 AM

Very creative with great imagery (from a poets point of view..lol...) enjoyed the read...well done!!

Marie Harrison

Date: 6/25/2010 10:39:00 PM

I hate going to that Dr's office! At least you enjoyed your visit!

Sarah Hales

Date: 6/23/2010 2:49:00 PM

Brill !!!!!! you will have to v the doc after me ha ha ha we must get him good P.D HEHEHEHEH GREAT WRITE !!!! SARAH X

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 6/23/2010 9:44:00 AM

I wonder if I should find a female doctor. This sounds exciting and should be given some thought. I like the creativity. Great job! Joseph

Jo Bien

Date: 6/23/2010 7:56:00 AM

Nice write...soup mail P.D. from J.B.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 6/23/2010 6:11:00 AM

Well written, P.D. I agree to Chris' comments! Thank you for your kind comments on my poems and have a nice day!...Gert

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/23/2010 2:09:00 AM

oh bummery farty, so you wrote this for my contest? what a bummer that you didn't get to enter this! and there I went loop the loop, avoiding your name too, thinking you entered---sorry I do think it closed earlier than I expected it to be--I added 5 more entries actually--too bad you weren't able to enter this :(( ---it definitely would've been in the winners' list ;) hopefully you could enter my next contest--that one's gonna be a real challenge ;)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/23/2010 1:51:00 AM

still haven't clicked on your name, haha but I saw this in the hot list and now I know why--this sure is a different style from you p.d. and it's really something--by any chance, did you enter my contest?? hmmm you should have entered this ;), I think it would have done quite well in that---haha here I am trying to take a break from judging--...nikko :)

Mitch White

Date: 6/22/2010 2:50:00 PM

You know I hayte da slam- I I wait for a semi normal zembalance of poetry- but u Ma'm- Have got twisty way of showing it to me- Bravo for your Sonnet here- Iknoew It's hard to be in those sturupz- but u make is seem like fun and well.. funny

Kevin Semeniuk

Date: 6/22/2010 9:24:00 AM

wow!..how do you manage to go from a slam to something like this..insane.. love it!

Patricia Gregory

Date: 6/22/2010 5:50:00 AM

Passionate indeed!! Really enjoyed for someone who trys not to go there. Waiting for my God sent Love. But you put me there with these words...Again much PASSION...I forgot!!!Thanks...Patricia

Lynette Chachere

Date: 6/21/2010 7:24:00 PM

missing the one you loved..or still hold dear in your heart, the strangest things may just remind you of them.this is sweet, nothing wrong with your write at all..i bet your ex husband was a great man, especially if he was with you. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/21/2010 3:16:00 PM

Hearts racing as well as the thoughts and other stuff according to the scales lol Enjoyed this one pd - tc Wilma