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The Disillusioned Man

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Always alone, no matter where never understanding the why The question not answered, there's no one to ask passage of time appears endless trying to fill an emptiness, struck at birth Watching from afar as others move through life with passion seeking their chosen course while I drift struggling to find purpose or reason in the dim light of days Tomorrows pass My thoughts are only of yesterdays when emptiness was smaller and was covered by the coat of ignorance If only I could find joy for one minute that minute would give a lifetime of memories where I could live in content Even now I'm a shadow passing through a crowd a mist they're separated from that will quickly disperse If I scream would anyone hear? If I spoke would anyone listen? If I disappeared would anyone care? How cold the world, how deep its pain not understanding why I'm alive 3/29/17

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Date: 5/6/2017 7:20:00 AM
your vocal delivery is amazing... tone rhythm speed articulation.. I could feel the confusion and frustration.
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Date: 5/6/2017 7:17:00 AM
Congrats on our top m placement
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Date: 5/6/2017 2:44:00 AM
Powerful write, Frederic. Congratulations on your First Place win. Regards, John.
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Date: 5/6/2017 12:57:00 AM
The bliss from the ignorance of youth, that is, for those whose childhood was not stolen. Great poem Frederic.
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Date: 5/6/2017 10:54:00 AM
Well said rob, and thank you for the kindness in your contest
Date: 4/10/2017 8:32:00 AM
wow Frederic, this is outstanding writing here..you are so gifted... :)
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Date: 4/3/2017 1:37:00 PM
Such a poignant, visceral poem, Frederick. A superb choice for POTD. Expressed w/so much emotional depth, it's heartbreaking to read. A true classic. Love always.
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Date: 4/1/2017 6:10:00 PM
Congratulations on this wonderful poem being honored with POTD. 7 ; )
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Date: 4/1/2017 2:21:00 PM
Congratulations, Frederic! The feelings of loneliness you describe are all too familiar. I especially like your comparison of a loner to "a shadow passing through a crowd." Lonely people tend to avoid crowded places for this reason. They feel even worse about their own lives when it appears no one else understands the concept of loneliness. Excellent writing, my friend! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 4/1/2017 9:20:00 AM
Hello Frederic, Congrats on the POTD honor!! I certainly agree with Carole's words below. I do think that writers as a group of individuals tend to be loners. I know this is not entirely true as a blanket statement, but deep-thought and introversion play a role in it -- I think. Like Carole, I've been there too. Yes, the World is Cold and is a cold place to be at times. It takes us poets to warm it up a bit with our words, and to seek meaning and understanding wherever we can. Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 4/1/2017 12:11:00 AM
Yes, I've been there too, Fredric, as I too am very alone most of the time. Fortunately, I got a little dog recently to keep me company. She hears me...and we all hear you. Take heart, friend. This is such an honest poem. Congrats on POTD.
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Date: 3/31/2017 9:57:00 PM
Congrats on POTD, Your feelings you have described so well. A7
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Date: 3/31/2017 8:55:00 PM
Frederic congratulations on Poem Of The Day with this wonderful poem~
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Date: 3/31/2017 4:48:00 PM
A most awesome write. Well done, i know many will relate to this even as I do. Congratulations on poem of the day.
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Date: 3/31/2017 2:21:00 PM
Frederic, this is a beautiful poem and also very sad... These questions, so important, and so many people asking them, hoping to get that answer: yes, you matter, yes I hear you, yes, I care. I care, does it matter that I do? But I mean it.
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Date: 3/31/2017 12:04:00 PM
Hello Frederic. I very much enjoyed the humanity within this entry and words. Be proud of it. It is well expressed. I actually read it twice to have its worth sink in. One could take line by line but its actually whole in its entirety that speaks of its power. Congratulations on it being chosen Poem Of The Day.
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Date: 3/31/2017 12:01:00 PM
It is an awful feeling, to feel like that, and youd escribed it very well. Congrats on POTD, Frederic.
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Date: 3/31/2017 11:57:00 AM
Congratulations on an honest poem that some are afraid to write.
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Date: 3/31/2017 6:34:00 AM
Somebody's not having a good day, wow Frederick so sadly well done, congratulations for POTD honors...
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Date: 3/31/2017 1:58:00 AM
Bright ideas..... congrats on being chosen.....
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Date: 3/29/2017 9:36:00 PM
This is a very well written poem for emoting this feeling that too many people seem to have. Hopefully not you.You are very good at fictional writes, I know!!!
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Date: 3/29/2017 9:34:00 PM
Probably door number one, Frederic. but I love all three. Now to see your poem.
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Date: 3/29/2017 5:21:00 PM
Dear, I have at times felt this. What a deep write...heartfelt. I'm blessed by reading your poetry, Frederic. I would hear.....I do hear. Blessings.
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Date: 3/29/2017 4:21:00 PM
Hauntingly sad write.
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Date: 3/29/2017 3:56:00 PM
Desperately sad my friend, this feels hollow and lost and that feeling is strong in your poem. Many wander this earth alone, asking questions that seem to have no answers, seeking to just belong somewhere. This poem hurts to read because the emotions are o well expressed. Really nicely done.
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Date: 3/29/2017 3:44:00 PM
The lonely life you describe is much like mine, Frederic. I understand the sadness of seeing happy families or hand-holding couples. If you truly feel this way, you are not alone. There are many who feel they've just dropped off the radar. Your poem is a personal favorite because only those who have spent a lot of time along can relate to it. Awesome!
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