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The Dilettante Diaries: Open Door Barefoot

The Dilettante Diaries: "Open Door Barefoot"
Open door to closed room Ceiling smashed Stars in a very clear sky Fresh air taken into lungs Risen from the Lake of None Arrival of White Doves Broken glass, careful where you step Barefoot Bleeds Love (Lovejoy-Burton/October 2018) for my daughter, Georgia
"THAT crazed girl improvising her music. Her poetry, dancing upon the shore, Her soul in division from itself Climbing, falling She knew not where, Hiding amid the cargo of a steamship, Her knee-cap broken, that girl I declare A beautiful lofty thing, or a thing Heroically lost, heroically found." The Poet Pleads with the Elementals THE Powers whose name and shape no living creature knows Have pulled the Immortal Rose; And though the Seven Lights bowed in their dance and wept, The Polar Dragon slept, His heavy rings uncoiled from glimmering deep to deep: When will he wake from sleep? Great Powers of falling wave and wind and windy fire, With your harmonious choir Encircle her I love and sing her into peace, That my old care may cease; Unfold your flaming wings and cover out of sight The nets of day and night. Dim powers of drowsy thought, let her no longer be Like the pale cup of the sea, When winds have gathered and sun and moon burned dim Above its cloudy rim; But let a gentle silence wrought with music flow Whither her footsteps go. (William Butler Yeats)
"Fly On" /Coldplay https://youtu.be/qtooMN9QZKw
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De Beaulieu Avatar
May 1, 2019 at 2:50 PM
Hello Leanne Lovejoy Burton, I have enjoyed this poem.I like the last two lines the best. I also enjoy reading poems from William Butler Yeast. This poem you wrote is beautifully written. have a nice day my friend.
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October 25, 2020 at 1:40 PM
Thank you Lady De Beaulieu.
La France Avatar
February 15, 2019 at 8:25 AM
Leanne, your poetry is beautiful and your images, links and videos are also, keep writing ~
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February 15, 2019 at 3:02 PM
Thank you Dear Heart. Very kind. I'm writing other projects off page.
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October 18, 2018 at 7:36 PM
4 GEORGIA...x (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mkSiYiphnm4)
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October 18, 2018 at 7:40 PM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pFlM8Ay-4u4
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October 17, 2018 at 4:16 PM
"THAT crazed girl improvising her music. Her poetry, dancing upon the shore, Her soul in division from itself Climbing, falling She knew not where, Hiding amid the cargo of a steamship, Her knee-cap broken, that girl I declare A beautiful lofty thing, or a thing Heroically lost, heroically found...
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October 17, 2018 at 4:17 PM
No matter what disaster occurred She stood in desperate music wound, Wound, wound, and she made in her triumph Where the bales and the baskets lay No common intelligible sound But sang, 'O sea-starved, hungry sea.' " (William Butler Yeats)
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