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The Devil's Tide

I looked up at a silver moon Peering through a cloud of misty gloom As we sailed across the Atlantic Sea That fateful night in June And as I stood upon the bow A furrow crossed my troubled brow As a dying star fall from the sky As the wind out of the north Began to cry 'Twas then with fearful heart I came at last to realize That we were sailing On a wave of ill-tidings Known as 'The Devil's Tide' For no omen of the sea Brought more fear than thee A fallen star - a silver moon Together in the month of June If legend true would surely bring us doom So with no trace of land in sight We sailed onward through the night I - the Captain 'Louie Lou' With my faithful crew Aboard the 3 mast schooner 'Angel - of the Blue' On canvas wings we flew Upon the wailing wind that blew Then suddenly a hush of malaise Crushed the summer night Filling all the crew with dreadful fright As all the stars in heaven lost their light And the silver moon dipped completely out of sight Leaving us to drift without guidance To our unknown plight An eerie sound began to roll out of the west Growing louder and louder as we held our breath Until it was upon us and the ship began rise As we looked in horror into the Devil's eye As the Angel of the Blue began to fly Up the Devil's breast she climbed 20 fathoms high One by one the Angel's wings were torn away As she fought to save us from the Devil's rage Screams of horror falling from her timber sides As the crew fell into the Devil's tide And I - tethered to the helm - watched them die As we climbed even higher into the Devil's eye And as the Angel's body creaked and cracked We finally scaled the crest and rode upon the Devil's back Just before I fainted and my world went black I woke up in the morning high on a mountain side Never knowing just how I had survived knowing only that my Angel and my crew had died ~~~ Many years have come and gone since then And I am forever haunted by each and every one of them My faithful crew and my mighty 'Angel of the Blue' I see their faces in my dreams As I awaken to their screams Wishing, too - that I had died But someone had to live To tell the tale of the 'Devil's Tide'. ~~~~~~~~ Author: Elaine George Entry for contest: Legends Awarded: First Place

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Date: 5/3/2016 6:28:00 PM
Excellent!!! Intriguing tale... Well done!!
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Date: 4/14/2011 6:28:00 PM
I remember this one I think I saw it long ago, didn't I? A big congratulations on an excellent story!
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Date: 4/14/2011 7:51:00 AM
This is wonderful Lainie...Congrats on your 1st place win. Jimmy
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Date: 4/13/2011 4:02:00 PM
Great job; a real topper, lainie..Congrats on the award! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 4/13/2011 9:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your awesome Ist Place Win in the "Legends" Contest, Laine! Well done! Always, Annalise
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Date: 4/13/2011 6:26:00 AM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Elaine
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Date: 4/13/2011 5:09:00 AM
Congratulations for your 1st Place win Lainie in the contest "Legends" sponsored by Carolyn Devonshire. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/13/2011 3:16:00 AM
Many Congratulations Elaine on your 1st place win in this amazing contest.Love, Gautami
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Date: 4/12/2011 10:28:00 PM
Wow! Chills with this amazing and superbly written piece, Lainie! Very deserving of your awesome win! It was like I was there-- Wow indeed, bravo for this captivating & intriguing piece-- Super congrats to you & no worries with my name-- our names look too much alike-- heehee others have mixed us up ;) hugs :)
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Date: 4/12/2011 9:19:00 PM
OMG Lainie, that was fantastic, what a well told story, held me mesmerized , I can see why it took first place, congrats
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Date: 4/12/2011 9:01:00 PM
Congrats Elaine on your first place win in this contest with this superb write my friend.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 4/12/2011 8:54:00 PM
you are indeed a wonder to read, a well deserved number one, Lainie, awesome. Harry
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Date: 4/12/2011 6:34:00 PM
A wonderful tale and congratulations for being at the top. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/12/2011 5:22:00 PM
You know I love this I have told you many times. Congrad's #1 gal. Light & Love
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Date: 4/12/2011 5:22:00 PM
Great Narrative you created, dear Lainie! Congratulations on your first place and thank you for your nice comment. Love, Iolanda (Andie:)
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Date: 4/12/2011 4:58:00 PM
A devil of a tide Elaine and good to see you come out on top. Nice Job! Congratulations on your worthy poem's first place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/12/2011 4:33:00 PM
That was awesome!! Great narrative!!! Well deserved 1st place. Congratulations. Brian
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Date: 4/12/2011 12:57:00 PM
Congrats on a well written well deserved 1st Place, Elaine. Awesome. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 4/12/2011 12:43:00 PM
Wow...Elaine...what a stunning tale this is! A true legend, it reads like a classic piece in a literary masterpiece! Well done..!!! Congratulations on your number 1 placement!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 4/12/2011 12:31:00 PM
Many congrats on your number one spot : )
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Date: 4/12/2011 10:51:00 AM
Elaine, this was such a compelling legend. Both John and I loved it. Big congratulations on your first-place win. The competition was strong so you can be proud of your placement! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/15/2010 12:21:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery to share your thoughts. Congratulations on you win in Deborah's contest. Way to go my friend. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/13/2010 4:08:00 AM
Congratulations on placing in the “Anything Goes!” contest sponsored by: Deborah Guzzi with this well written, creative, scary, and captivating poem. Enjoy your glory! Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 7/9/2010 11:30:00 AM
Congratulations Lainie on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Anything Goes" Love, Carol
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Date: 7/8/2010 3:15:00 PM
Congratulations Elaine on your win with this worthy presentation. Agape, Moses
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