The Devil's Due

I made a deal with the Devil..... 20% down....and chase me.

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Date: 9/27/2023 1:27:00 PM

haha, I like Jerry's answer here. Oh, and thanks for putting me on the monoku winner list.

Date: 9/27/2023 5:05:00 AM

Ready, set, charge.

Date: 9/26/2023 9:42:00 PM

Thought-provoking Monoku, John. Messing with the devil is danger, Will Robinson. Have a great week, my friend. Bill

Date: 9/26/2023 6:50:00 PM

Hahahahaha! Face me and Race me were on a track...

Date: 9/26/2023 8:39:00 AM

My understanding is he can do a hundred yard dash in 5.9 seconds. I'd ask for a refund and contract cancel

Date: 9/26/2023 7:41:00 AM

I can't tell you how many times I've made a similar deal with the Devil...EEGADS. Had to learn the lesson the hard way :-)

Date: 9/26/2023 5:49:00 AM

Haughty that he is… he took the deal. RUN, JOHN! RUN!!!

Lin Lane
Date: 9/26/2023 6:06:00 AM

Lol Good thinking!

John Lawless
Date: 9/26/2023 5:51:00 AM

I think I'm safe....I put it on my brother's credit card