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The Devil Made Me Do It

 

Bedeviled by lust
He didn't wear red or have a cape
But oh, those brown eyes

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Dr Hitendra Mehta

October 26, 2010 at 7:28 AM

Barbara... congrats on win in contest ..... Luv/best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 25, 2010 at 9:14 AM

Congratulations Barbara on your win in Paula's contest. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

October 20, 2010 at 9:11 AM

Con your win with this gem. Lvoe, Joyce

Tahera Mannan

October 20, 2010 at 8:03 AM

Many congratulations on this terrific write and win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

October 20, 2010 at 5:08 AM

Congrats BG on your big win in Paula's contest with this great Senryu entry fitting the theme so very well.. enjoy your top spot for a top notch poem..luv..

Diane Locksley

October 19, 2010 at 9:59 PM

I missed this too, Barbara, but glad I caught it now that it's a winner. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

October 19, 2010 at 7:21 PM

Hey I think I had missed this one., barbara. I really like it. A big congratulations on your win in the Bedeviled contest!!

James Fraser

October 17, 2010 at 10:01 AM

I bet those brown eyes could reveal so so much. Wonderful Sunyru Barbara, and good luck in the contest >> James :)

Kim Hilliker

October 16, 2010 at 10:49 PM

lol. I really appreciate your writing style, Barbara. Thanks for sharing all your poems.

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 6, 2010 at 11:15 AM

Loved reading your poetry today Barbara. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol

Chuck Keys

October 5, 2010 at 1:13 PM

nicely done, well executed. chuck

Dr.Ram Mehta

October 5, 2010 at 1:01 PM

You said everything in this short and sweet Senryu, Barabara. Good

Joyce Johnson

October 5, 2010 at 12:16 PM

Good luck in the contest. Thank youfor my 2nd place in the Heaven contest. i understand that it was hard to judge. They were all first place winners. Love, Joyce