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The Desperate Mother

One week I noticed every single day a woman running into our small store. She looked so desperate and could not pay for milk she took. She’d rush right out the door. I could not bring myself to stop her when she’d grab the milk, then flee. Her eyes were wild. The fourth day came, and I decided then to follow her. Perhaps she had a child? Into a cemetery I was led by following this woman. Suddenly the woman vanished, but to where she’d fled was shocking. There a new grave I did see. I heard a baby’s cry. I dug down to the casket, and the woman – she was dead! Her child (NOT dead) lay on her chest! Who knew? On milk his ghost mom brought him he’d been fed! Oct. 12, 2021 for Tania Kitchin's Something Spooky 8 To 16 Lines Poetry Contest

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Date: 12/12/2021 3:34:00 AM
Never expected such a violent twist at the end . So spooky ! Your imaginations runs wild, Andrea
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Date: 10/25/2021 11:45:00 AM
What a story Andrea! Triumph born from tragedy! A mother's compassion has no boundaries - earthly or heavenly! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 10/25/2021 12:19:00 AM
Indeed, a wonderful work! Touching as well as scaring. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/24/2021 2:19:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your winning placement with your scary and clever tale!
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Date: 10/24/2021 12:17:00 PM
spooky and touching at the end Andrea, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/24/2021 9:59:00 AM
WOW!!! Congratulations on your win. A creative story/write. "Love It" Have a blessed autumn day..............................
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Date: 10/18/2021 1:03:00 PM
Nicely done; a truly haunting tale, but as a mother, I can certainly applaud your efforts to ignore this daily theft, realizing there must be a hungry child out there somewhere.
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Date: 10/14/2021 8:06:00 AM
Eerie write, Andrea, but clever and shows a mothers love will go to any length - makes for excellent reading - good luck in the contest my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 10/13/2021 10:28:00 PM
Definitely spooky, but ultimately touching. A mother's love for her child never dies. I wish you all the best in this contest.
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Date: 10/13/2021 10:31:00 AM
This is truly spooky..Ria... and the last line... the ghost mom feeding the baby... so sad too... but gave me chills... Oh...eerier than what you told me yesterday... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 10/13/2021 10:14:00 AM
Andrea, Chilling and exquisite! Take Care, Paulette
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Date: 10/13/2021 9:06:00 AM
Quite different and spooktacular! Cemetery living with a single ghostmother.
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Date: 10/13/2021 4:59:00 AM
You have all the varied spices to keep the reader glued to your lines, Andrea: baby, lady, milk, grave and weep are strong words. WOW! This is a heartwarming poem!
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Date: 10/13/2021 1:43:00 AM
This is very original as ghost stories go. I loved it. A ghost feeding her baby, Wow. I'm sure it's a winner.
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