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The Depth of Souls

the depth of souls of lonely souls lonely lonely souls massive crushing emptiness shattering thundering silences from within bottomless walls blinding deafening darkness in the depth of souls lonely lonely souls Submitted on March 25, 2018 for CONTEST NO 415 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 2ND

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/31/2018 7:02:00 AM

The sound of silence like a pounding. Every bit of your brief poem is haunting! Congrats on your win, Line!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/31/2018 8:04:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Kim.

Samuel Otieng

Date: 3/31/2018 1:01:00 AM

I like this line "blinding deafening darkness" I enjoyed reading this poem. Congratulations on your win Line Gauthier.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/31/2018 8:04:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Samuel. Much appreciated.

Frederic Parker

Date: 3/25/2018 10:54:00 AM

the depth of lonely souls cannot be measured as it is an unending pit of loneliness recorded in the ledger of time by the ancient hand of ancestors carried through the eternities from past choices and deeds encoded in the DNA of the spirit...just a thought

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/25/2018 7:51:00 PM

That really is deep, Frederic. I will keep that in mind ;-) Thanks for your most enjoyable visit and comment. Line xx