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The Depth of My Imagination

I have always had a vivid imagination,
as a child, I could make up stories in my head;
then, I began to write them down on paper,
but a story was too long, so poetry was the answer.

Now, even at night watching the moon,
I am taken away on a fantasy journey beyond;
especially, a full moon, so mysterious and soothing,
I let it take me until the birds are calling.

Sometimes, I stand on top of a mountain,
with a view of valleys and streams flowing below;
it is like I can touch the clouds, fly with the birds,
and in my trance, I let myself fall, fall, falling.

A river is roaring past me as I stand still,
among the towering trees, and I hear him coming;
a beautiful velvet brown horse running towards me,
he stops and I get on and away we gallop.

But, there are also things in the shadows,
things that frighten me and things lurking;
I must be careful in this dreamy infinite world,
for there are evil spirits waiting for my soul.

The darkest hour is just before dawn,
when I must fight my way back into reality;
I have a dreadful fear that one day, I will be lost,
in the depth of my imagination.

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September 27, 2017

Verse/The Depth of my Imagination
Copyright Protected, ID 945166


Written for the contest, Image Me A Poem
sponsor, Mystic Rose

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Hamilton Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 8:27 PM
Congrats Constance on an amazing write, you took us on a journey and I felt like I was there, great imagery.
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 27, 2017 at 5:23 PM
How wonderful this poem was honored with First Place Constance. Congratulations! I am happy I didn't miss reading it. I saw it on the Best New Poems List! It is very inspiring! : )
Barden Avatar
October 5, 2017 at 6:54 AM
Imagination is the key to staying young - loved this write, BW - Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend! :-)
Lane Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 4:36 PM
Way deep on imagination, BW. Congrats.
Roper Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 11:44 AM
Congratulations on your win, Broken Wings!
Gentile Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 9:58 AM
Congrats on your win, Broken Wings!
Gentile Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 9:55 AM
Congrats on your win, Broken Wings!
Gentile Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 9:54 AM
Congrats on your win, Broken Wings!
Lindley Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 7:08 AM
MY FRIEND, THIS IS CLASSIC GOLDEN POETRY... Self revelation and depths too oft others shun in their writings! Appears we both walk imaginary lands in our dreams and live to write about such.. A fav.. an amazing display of poetic talent!
Sivey Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 4:35 AM
Wow, Constance, you surely have amazed me by your glorious verse here! I loved how you integrated the horse into the poem, that was very awesome! May you always find you way back into reality my friend, being in your imagination for awhile is one thing, but to be lost in it, forever, is another! What a tremendous piece, Great Work!!
Pandit Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 7:14 PM
The poem has such lovely rhythm and flow--and the thoughts that ride like the picture it depicts--best for a win, BW!
Sands Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 6:32 PM
I love how you wrote this poem Broken wings. I was lost in it too! Good luck in the contest :)
Wanter Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 6:31 PM
This writing is so wonderful. So many of us fit into it, but cannot truly express it.
Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 6:24 PM
Wow, Constance, this is written so beautifully. May your ink never dry. You were born to be a poet!
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