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The Demise of a Newborn Dragonfly

Its delicate wings no longer wet, it stretched well,
And flew up high holding onlookers in its spell.
Round and around it danced over the eerie pond
All covered with water lilies but not beyond.

Elation, euphoria, joy and disbelief,
Emotions fell as it landed on fragrant leaf.
Up again, its gossamer wings attaining strength,
As once again it fluttered across the pond's length.

Hungry it spied a tasty bug, gorged on its feed,
Then instinct urged it to find its first mate to breed.
The feat accomplished, it resumed its fullest flight
Knowing full well it needed rest before twilight.

Survival of the fittest it had never learned.
Bird ate it up, that natural death it had earned.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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George Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 8:46 PM
The dragon fly was so excited about its flight, never knowing a cruel fate awaited it. Even though it is the story of just a fly, you have described it in such a way that it evokes pathos in the readers. Enjoyed reading this beautifully rhyming poem. Quite heartfelt narration, dear Victor.
Williams Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 12:21 AM
Oh, that's so sad that it only lived for a day or so; still, by the sound of things, it managed to achieve a lot. I love dragonflies. There a lot around at the moment, especially near our swimming pool. A fave for me dear Victor, you've written a wonderful poem...Hugs
Roper Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 9:39 PM
Heartfelt story. Dragon flies are so beautiful and to watch. Well done my friend.
Dietrich Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 3:54 PM
oh the ending is funny. That's how it goes. The world of nature is never safe.
Mcintosh Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 3:39 PM
Amazing writing, story telling, beautifully done. I just love this. A fave. God bless you always, love, Gina
Kitchin Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 12:42 PM
Victor, wonderfully penned, beautiful imagery too.
Brotherton Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 2:15 PM
A stunning sonnet, my friend. A wonderful story brilliantly conveyed. Well done, Victor.
Bowring Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 9:23 AM
Such a well written sonnet dear Victor from your gifted pen. You have skilfully created wonderful imagery with the little dragonfly. The poem has great flow with great rhymes. Bit :( reading the concluding couplet with its ending of its life cycle but it was a beautiful read my friend. Blessings to you.
Empress Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 3:16 AM
So descriptive and meaningful this is dear victor. I love the way youv delivered this. So many lines stood out for me and also the rhymes are brilliant and has a captivating cadence! Very well woven. Survival you’ve shown us through your words, which many can resonate with. How clever and soulful! Loved reading this. Sending you light always
Cunningham Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 1:17 AM
Sadly only the fittest survive and other creatures have to survive too. Tom
Baker Avatar
February 2, 2024 at 10:17 PM
Fine sonnet, my friend. I enjoyed reading of the life cycle of the dragonfly. Live and die, this is the cycle of life. Thanks for sharing this well written sonnet, Victor. Have a pleasant weekend. Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
February 2, 2024 at 7:11 PM
Such a wonderful poet! You always have an unexpected twist! <3
Buehler Avatar
February 2, 2024 at 6:52 PM
Loved this bittersweet tale, Victor. At least the dragonfly was able to feed and mate and to soar before death. This is a fave for me.
Rose  Avatar
February 2, 2024 at 2:59 PM
You seem to know the nature of things and the beauty that they bring, Victor, I really enjoyed this
Greenhough Avatar
February 2, 2024 at 2:57 PM
But it did survive. It mated before it died. I love bugs, so I really enjoyed your poem.
Kendrick Avatar
February 2, 2024 at 1:38 PM
Sad that some bugs have such short lives in one way or another, but God knew what He was doing. Thank you for sharing this creative one with us. I enjoyed reading about the young dragonfly. Sara K
One Avatar
February 2, 2024 at 11:12 AM
Your poem skilfully captures the fleeting beauty and fragility of life, inviting readers to reflect on the cyclical nature of existence and the delicate balance between triumph and tragedy in the natural world..
Hind Avatar
February 2, 2024 at 9:16 AM
Ah, so sad. I feel sorry for it. You described its rewarding life so well, until it became some bird's lunch.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 2, 2024 at 8:22 AM
The mighty and the small all succumb to the same fate. Still those of us who witness the dragonfly in flight will collectively sigh. I enjoyed your poem very much.
Ashley Avatar
February 2, 2024 at 7:43 AM
Dear Victor, I adore your poem! This piece is exquisite, filled with beauty and dynamic imagery. The title is tempting and dramatic, I couldn't resist its pull. Your vivid imagery kept my mind's eye of your darting dragonfly till his demise. True to your verse, I felt the "elation, euphoria, joy and disbelief" - your golden pen is gifted indeed! Amazing poetry my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
May Avatar
February 2, 2024 at 7:25 AM
It was a predator at first then became prey, such are the ways of nature, Very nicely written Victor
Poet Avatar
February 2, 2024 at 6:38 AM
There is no denying the depth of the idea of survival of the fittest. The core of it is summed up by the turning twist in the end. Nature might seem merciless and brutal at times — A stunning poem, Victor.
Pandit Avatar
February 2, 2024 at 5:04 AM
Survival of the fittest--yes indeed. The turn in the ending spells the essence!
Seeker Avatar
February 2, 2024 at 4:07 AM
So Wenatchee like our life, if we reflect
Andresen Avatar
February 2, 2024 at 3:08 AM
- Life can seem brutal in nature... - A great poem, Victor :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs
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