The Deer Bed

Cold crisp air this thirty-nine degree morning
Out on the chilly porch shivering from the cold

An unusual sound draws my attention
What could that possibly be this time of day
Three deer bedded down under the great oak
When they heard the door open spooked ran

The sky is clear, a very soft blue
Sun seems to radiate a halo
On this clear early morning
The color at the horizon is sand

Slightly tinted and shaken with pinkish brown
The roosters are crowing for the sun to come on
Their voices seem to oppose each other
As if to say this is my space, my day.

The veil of mist rises from the creek in the vale
Slowly creeping higher as if the cold air 
Weights in down in place

This is not a morning to linger for there 
Is no firepit or heater out here to warm 
The cold almost freezing air but the beauty
Is so inviting even though the chill sends shivers

Thank you God for this few minutes on the porch
It helps me to relax and renew my spirit
With this I can be a better person 
When I interact with others all day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Culverhouse Avatar
November 27, 2009 at 6:11 PM
nicely penned
Sweetheart Avatar
November 26, 2009 at 5:27 AM
Magnificently beautiful thoughts in this poem Sara and so gratifying to enjoy the free things of life given to us by God..your lst verse is one we all need to assume .. wonderful words to live by... we all strive to be blessings to one another... thankxxx for sharing this thankxxxgiving morn and also for the wonderful comments on my poetry.. encouraging and uplifty.. I am in Pittsburgh visiting my brother for a few day .. he is letting me use his computer to stay in touch with Soup.. luv..
Dufresne Avatar
November 26, 2009 at 5:03 AM
Thank you for sharing your eye view of God's awesome creation from your corner of the world. We are fortunate to have poet friends who can share their perspectives with us as you have done so well in this free verse, Sara. Have a happy . Robert
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