The Deer

After the quiet snow
comes the grinding grit
throwing blind shrapnel
at windshields.

Night drives wind-horses,
stampeding phantoms 
that enter my glassy eyes,
then tug at the steering wheel
as I edgily negotiate 
the corners of swerving shadows.

Once, the hind hoof of a doe
slapped at my startled face,
the Chevy twitched
and plowed on
as its lights raked the earth.
Through the rear mirror
I thought for a moment
I could see myself
prone on the asphalt.

The deer escaped,
but it had slashed holes in the sludge,
those tracks still drum and echo
under nights iron curtain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Samuelson Avatar
May 2, 2022 at 9:18 PM
This is a really interesting piece! It's both got vivid and subtle imagery!
Ashford Avatar
May 3, 2022 at 7:51 AM
Thanks Deborah, your comment is appreciated.
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