The Death of Pleasantries

My monocle, please, or if you please, my spectacles so I can attempt to eye a book with both irises and which book to attack first: the gigantic book of fashion; it’s not a lap animal, vegetable or otherwise; and the floral pages - both have large print, I think. Oh, yes, and speaking in tongues, that is the craft of language; a book (oh, yes, quite funny) on trees (aren’t they the funny things that we write upon); and murder! Murder, you say?! …those found in the bible. “What!” say you… First the death of pleasantries or pleasant trees (funny, right?) Then sibling rivalry to the extreme. ‘Thou shall not kill,” did Cain know this one? or ‘thou shall not covet…?’ All of these emotions, quite the spectacle, spectacularly so… So what is in fashion today? Do we like a good murder, on parade…seems too many do. Jesus flipped the script -really, he handcrafted the language of love. Love God first; and love your neighbor as you love yourself. Sins brought to the surface. Love covers a multitude of sins. It is a sin not to go to the library and bring home so many friends that you can listen to. Don’t kill the messenger. My monocle please!
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Delaney Avatar
August 12, 2025 at 1:25 PM
Kim. I do love word play and 'pleasant trees'. A winner for me. SuZ
Rodrigues Avatar
August 12, 2025 at 7:44 PM
Yay! Thank you, SuZ! Hugs ~ Kim
Hind Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 9:36 PM
This is clever, lol - I have a lot of respect when your works go this way. People lose sight. Hats off again, Kim <3
Rodrigues Avatar
August 12, 2025 at 7:45 PM
Thank you so much! xx
Baker Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 6:22 PM
Creative and entertaining poetry, my friend. Write On! Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
August 12, 2025 at 7:45 PM
Glad you enjoyed this one :)
Wolf Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 3:56 PM
Heh-heh. Are you communicating telepathically or whatever with Phileas Fogg? ~ Two Monocles to go, please -- or goggles, if you prefer
Rodrigues Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 5:06 PM
LOL!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 3:45 PM
enjoyed the flow and amusing lines. What an extraordinairly creative poem. Must fave. enjoy your evening, Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 5:07 PM
Thank you for the fave! I appreciate! Thank you!
Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 3:09 PM
Quite the monologue here, Kim. I found some parts of it quite amusing.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 3:34 PM
Makes me happy, you did! Thank you, Andrea!
Munslow Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 2:50 PM
Love this. Especially the monocle and way the library becomes religion. Very well written too. Gabby
Rodrigues Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 3:35 PM
I love the library…I have books here but there are more books there…lol! Thank you, Gabrielle!
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